I like this, so please continue. Also do understand that bad reviews and criticizing reviews are different

I only read the description, but it seems to be similar to apocalypse bitch system. Can anyone say how the both are related and what the changes are

Good job man, keep it up. Even though your writing quality is less than stellar, I appreciate the story. As a fellow countryman I applaud your writing.

Superb story, although there's some grammatical errors and such, if you are someone like me who is addicted to reading that you would go read machine translated novels, then there's nothing to fear, its good enough to read without worries. But, I think that the story is going a bit fast. Anyway damn great work man. Keep it up