Your Quite Welcome. I hope you enjoy the remainder of my novel too! :)

Again, what really hurt this book is the grammar. often times as I was reading u noticed that were small, grammar errors that were left there that could Have been edited away or edited into something else. I think they were trying to include how messages were being conveyed, but the grammar mistakes just hurt it.

What holds this back is the grammar. it's a good start but the grammar hurts it.

This is a good start and I'll have to check this out when I get more free time. definitely seems like this is gonna be a story I enjoy. I can't wait to see more.