And i think you should get the amount of kamic piont he gains in order and the things he has to do in order to gain them

I think goblin slayer is better

It feels like a cliche power fantasy fanfic now with hardship for the mc

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Rewrite please

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Is he going to get the things that all-castle tought him when the percentage is complete

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You can make him develop the breathing technique qnd styles ( demon slayer ) Or take inspiration from : Kenshi ( mortal combat ) he is blind seismic sense from toph (avatar ) Extasensory perception tanjiro's sense of smell ( he could smell emotion and alot of other things) Zeinitsu sense hearing ( he could hear others intention i think) sensitivity to air direction and temperature differentials in his environment If you want to give him powers or develop something i suggest search in the superpowers wiki

Make him fire bend like fire force anime

You should add mor spice to the story Right now it's like one those story that mc will never suffer just that somebody close to him get hurt and never lose anybody . And you should know that nobody knows that kingpin is wilson fisk , nobody ever saw him And you shouldnt give him something that conflict with marvel's logic like chakra , hamon , mana, jutsu , doujutsu Not ki though , marvel has ki or chi but it's diffrent from dragon ball's ki or you could try to synch them to marvel logic like hamon is mystical energy that you can draw from a dimension

Harem

Konosuba

Start a company Become influental Monitor potential villains and heroes Experiment on his genes See if he can have doomsday's powers (cause doomsday was kryptonian ) like what omnitrix do to make ultimate aliens Get rid of dengerous villains (like stryker ) Don't let franklin be born ( reed richards and susan's child ) Make allies And name the company umbrella

What's his power or cheat Like what's he gonna do to be able to beat someone like thor ?

It's amazing but i think your MC is a bit chaotic and too carefree like he is just going with the flow, and the chat group side oc fic hasn't been properly intruduced