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Nxgen_Snail_Kota

Nxgen_Snail_Kota

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I like to read most of the time, and anything I write will probably be trash cuz I'm absolute shite at it and I'm still gonna do it cuz its fun.

2021-07-23 JoinedUnited States
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota7mth
    Replied to Door_kun

    What country do you live in where school starts at 3?

    As we continue to live peacefully away from the public eye, there's been an interesting development: we've entered school, and now we're kindergarteners.
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    Idol Daughter's Dimensional Group Chat
    Anime & Comics · Door_kun
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota7mth
    Commented
    '"I'M A GIRL!??????"—is what I wanted to say, but all that came out was: "WAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!??"
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    Idol Daughter's Dimensional Group Chat
    Anime & Comics · Door_kun
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota7mth
    Commented

    Bro is not Thorfin

    Without glancing at him, I replied, "Disappointed? Yes. Fear? No... Why must I fear death? After all... Death is not the opposite of living." My murky eyes remained fixed on my lifeless body lying on the ground.
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    Idol Daughter's Dimensional Group Chat
    Anime & Comics · Door_kun
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota8mth
    Commented
    "I-Impossible…" Vegeta held his stomach as he dropped to his knees in pure disbelief and pain.
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    I’m a Proud Member of the Frieza Force!
    Anime & Comics · CaptainBoyHole
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota8mth
    Commented

    Property tax, the cost of ingredients, maintenance, employee wages, the business tax, employee benefits (If there are any) and any repairs and renovations means this cafe should have gone under if it only makes 150,000 a year. (Unless it's financed by the MCs family)

    In a year alone, the cafe earns the lady nearly 150,000 dollars!
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    MHA: Author of Fate
    Anime & Comics · NoNameDeity
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota9mth
    Commented
    Dolian rambled on and on, and as if he didn't notice it, started to belittle Dhep's stature as a man with an arrogant tone. Hearing Dolian's smug and 'know-it-all' tone seemed to have bothered Dhep as he refuted Dolian's statement after being barraged with a series of taunts as if he was possessed, "But I don't like girls all that much in the first place!"
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    MHA: Author of Fate
    Anime & Comics · NoNameDeity
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota9mth
    Posted

    This guys stuff is always fun to read so five starts. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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    MHA: Author of Fate
    Anime & Comics · NoNameDeity
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Posted

    This one, just like everything else I write is a random collection of thoughts I came up with while washing dishes put onto paper with no filter.

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    Upping my kill count across the infinite realities
    Anime & Comics · Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Posted

    The entire story is filled with references to other fictional works and random moments that were funny in my head. If you want an actual story, read sum else cuz this ain't it.

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    So im a dragon, so what?
    Anime & Comics · Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Posted

    Not bad. The Grammar is fine, and so is the basic sentence structure making it readable which I can't say for 75% of the works on here. The world background is already set up so to get lower than a four you would have to actively try and fuck it up. The story development is fairly quick but that's fine as UBW is filled with a lot of bullshit that could be easily skipped. Character Design... could use some work. Dialogue is fast and without substance, instead of reading as two characters having a conversation it reads as two people running lines with each other. Someone will say something, someone else will say something and move on without expressing any emotion, or tone. The question and exclamation marks will only take you so far before it all starts to blend together in a banal mess of conversations that feel more like dialogue options from an Oblivion NPC than two people actually talking to one another. Plus, (And this is a personal opinion) it's really ugly when there are sound effects to demonstrate what characters are doing instead of something like - ("She broke down into sobs, staining the front of my shirt with her tears") Or ("Our conversation was abruptly ended by the ringing of the lunch bell") But otherwise it's a fine fic.

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    So I'm Shiraori in Fate, so what? [UNDERGOING REWRITE]
    Anime & Comics · Goddess_Nihility
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Posted

    It's not bad. The story itself is exactly what you would expect from DXD wish fulfillment so nothing groundbreaking, but the only major issue is how ugly the wiring is. It's not unreadable by any means, in fact, the grammar is one of the better aspects of the story, but the sentence structure is abhorrent. Run on, after run on, after run on with commas acting in place of periods like that somehow makes it a complete sentence. It doesn't. But aside from that it's fine.

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    Limits of the Flesh in DXD
    Anime & Comics · Azazyel
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Commented

    True, I love stealing

    It seemed like it was a place completely untouched by humans— which was surprising to her since humans loved to take stuff and make it their own.
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    In Marvel as The Hive
    Movies · ZeroX0666
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Replied to Virik
    [A message from _____: It hurts seeing my little baby in danger, I said I wasn't going to help you but it pains me to see you in trouble, get stronger so you can know mommy's name without ceasing to exist - Love, Mommy <3]
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    I was reincarnated as a Crow? (DROPPED)
    Anime & Comics · Banchii
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Commented

    If criminals can't take from other criminals all they can do is take from the civilian populace.

    He was happy with the things he accomplished in Nanjing. A criminal enterprise that worked together and not against each other was bound for success.
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    The Monk in the MCU
    Movies · Cedric_7512
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Commented
    This event was different, he wasn't the one who was in danger, in fact, he was the danger. He killed, and his first blood wasn't just on one person, it was on hundreds of people caused by one single wave of his arm. He stared at his hand, all bloody and soaked in puke, the very hand that held the demonic knife of space whose one slash caused so much destruction.
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    Infinite Realities: Re
    Anime & Comics · NoNameDeity
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Posted

    It's not bad. The grammar and writing style is digestible, which is saying something on this site, but it reads less like a novel and more like the MC is crafting his own autobiography. The whole, 'My name is' introduction breaks immersion in one of the worst ways possible and comes off kinda cringe. No normal person wakes up one day and decides to start monologing about their entire life story up to that point, they know who they are, and what they like and don't like so there's no reason for them to reiterate it to themselves, it makes the character feel less like a character and more like an outsider looking in, a really bad plot device to explain to the readers who the main character is. I would have rather we got to know who our main character was and their passions, opinions, and pastimes through their actions, either through a brief showing in the first chapter of the main character doing what they enjoy, (if they like reading, show them reading a book for an hour or two) or talking to someone else about their personal opinions on matters in a natural way, (Like talking to their friends about stocks or something over breakfast) anything other than that cringe shit. Still, I enjoy this author's other stuff and aside from my own personal gripes at the beginning, this story isn't bad.

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    Infinite Realities: Re
    Anime & Comics · NoNameDeity
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Commented

    His super power is prep time

    But when his wealth and assets came into the picture, then that would be his superpower.
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    In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System
    Movies · OneArmedImmortal
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Replied to Vacuum_Voyager

    At this point I think he is either in his late or Mid 40s

    It has been some time since I played the games, ok? So I'm entitled to forget some of its parts, right? It's been more than fifty years since I played that particular mission. I dare anyone to remember the name after fifty years!
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    Interesting Times
    Video Games · Zanarkand_Kido
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Commented
    'offend me, go on, meanwhile I will make your son my lover and in the future all your legacy will be mine' Augustus
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    Trap Lannister Legendary Swordsman
    TV · Jade_beauty_tits
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
    Nxgen_Snail_Kota1yr
    Replied to Ethereal062

    U tellin me yr just gonna sit by a watch someone get raped when you have the power and authority to stop it? Bruh.

    Galeno remembers when he took Augustus to the city of Lannisport, this little boy, upon seeing an attempt at sexual abuse, did not hesitate and used a simple dagger to cut the criminal's jugular, a quick and precise cut that killed a man three times his size and didn't even throw up
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    Trap Lannister Legendary Swordsman
    TV · Jade_beauty_tits
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