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Nxgen_Snail_Kota

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I like to read most of the time, and anything I write will probably be trash cuz I'm absolute shite at it.

2021-07-23 JoinedUnited States
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    In my past life, I was your everyday human male and I was on my way to becoming a veterinarian just like my Aunt.
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    Tokyo Ghoul: The Diclonius Queen
    Anime & Comics · The_Bip_Boop2003
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    He's like Tanya, but more uppity.

    The white robe is harder to cut than I expected, enchantments perhaps? Possibly, if 'mages' exist in this place, then it's quite likely that something akin to enchantment exists. God, I hate magic, it's a word used to describe an unknown phenomenon by people who don't know science.
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    Inspired Inventor (Tensura AU)
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Commented
    'Damn, I almost died from chakra exhaustion from the first time using chakra? What the hell is this!? Why didn't anyone tell me about this!? You can't just let unsupervised children do this kind of thing, shouldn't there be an instruction manual about this!?'
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    Naruto: Playful Illusionist
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    I can, and I did

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    Meta(In)Stability
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Replied to MAGE_OF_FLOWER

    Ddraig and Albion from DXD

    'Your body has been gone for ages now red one, and as if you would be of any help when he already has myself.'
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    Zieg's quest to punch Odin's face
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Yet she had never felt more alive. "That's right... this feeling." the Valkyrie's lips began to twitch upward.
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    Zieg's quest to punch Odin's face
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Going good deeds out of spite? I like it.

    Yeah I responded by using millions of company funds under his nose, liberating the workers, and building homeless shelters and shit. Not because I was trying to look like a good person, but because it would both piss off that fucker Jacques and make him look bad in front of his upper class 'friends'.
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    Zieg's quest to punch Odin's face
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    So you didn't finish season one then?

    In case it wasn't completely obvious before, I'm currently in RWBY. That show about some teenagers fighting evil creatures, terrorists and magical things. I think this world came this way after the gods went and wiped everyone out and fucked off into space or something. Hard to remember since I kind of stopped watching after the writing became garbage.
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    Zieg's quest to punch Odin's face
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Commented

    So a plot contrivance? Fun.

    My katana began to shine even brighter and then my katana was finally sinking into his neck until I finally cut it off. (I know you need to have a Nichirin Sword to cut a demon's head off but the power of Tenshi is more mysterious than you can even think of. Maybe.)
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    Demon Slayer: I Have Deadpool's Powers!
    Anime & Comics · LazyLifeToday
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    I dreamed a dream in times gone by When hope was high and life worth living I dreamed, that love would never die I dreamed that God would be forgiving

    I had a dream.
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    Demon Slayer: I Have Deadpool's Powers!
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    "I take something long and hard out of my pants" is a better inuendo.

    I take something out of my pants and aim it at the fat bastard. I just realized how wrong that sounds.
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    Demon Slayer: I Have Deadpool's Powers!
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Commented

    Gotta say this is kinda funny

    Ch 2 the Trex duo
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    My heroic journey as a trap 2.0
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Commented

    Did you know that over 300 thousand children under the age of 6 were put into foster care over the last 2 years?

    orphanage a residential area created to take care and provide for orphan children
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    My heroic journey as a trap 2.0
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Posted

    (Only 5 chapters in) It's well written with a well-thought-out plot line from what I can see but I can't help but feel every single character who isn't the MC is just a plot device to further the MC's development. The Matron, The Bully, The Kids, the smelly apartment owner, each one has one character trait and one only. The Matron is abusive, The bully is abusive, the kids are innocent, and the apartment owner is a lecherous piece of shit who probably deals in drugs and people. None of them appear at length, and none of them appear again after serving their purpose. The bully just goes away after the trial. The Matron just goes away after the MC gets kicked out. The kids are meant to show what exactly? The her early years the Kids are also bullies, but after the MC gets into high school they all just vanish into the wind. Where did they go? What happened to them? What about Molly? The main bully who tormented the MC? Why did she just disappear? Did she get adopted? Did she leave of her own volition after she came of age? The author doesn't tell us because she was unimportant. Except she wasn't, she was a driving point for the Meek nature of the MC. Without Sally, the MC might not have had such a serve distrust of people. Same for the black girl that bullied the MC. She was sent to jail after she shot the MC but I'm over here wondering why? What motivation did she have? She was obviously a racist, or was she? We don't see her attacking anyone else, and because the school the MC goes to was diverse enough I don't think the MC was the only Asian there. So I wonder why the black girl was so obsessed with the MC that she would attempt to kill her. We don't find out. Because as soon as she serves her purpose she goes away never to be seen again. There is a clear pattern here. Each side character does one thing and then leaves. That say's a lot about the Authors writing. How narrow it is and will be when dealing with characters the author considers unimportant. They are important. Because if the side characters are One dimensional the MC will be the same. And that fact is reinforced heavily based on the fact that the MC for all intents and purposes is an idiot. Despite having an IQ on par with Tony stark, the MC is a dumbass. Overall it's decent as far as everything goes. But I want to see more, I want side characters that actually do something that isn't plot relevant. Or at least, I want to see the fallout their actions have of the side characters themselves. I'm not asking for you to write contained stories about them, but I want to see why these characters do what they do, and if they just fuck off into thin air the moment their role is over then why even bother reading the story? The MC is uninteresting as hell. The whole Shy Genuis archetype is played out and this MC in general just gets on my nerves. Trauma is a real-world issue I don't deny, but the fact that the MC is living a second life, memories in tack, and acts like a newborn babe in almost every situation is a huge turn-off for me. All in all. It's good, but it needs work.

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    A Hero by the Name of Silk
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Commented

    I can't tell if the MC is slow or not.

    "I need to be careful?" I asked in a low voice.
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    A Hero by the Name of Silk
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Commented

    Bit of a plug but if you want some diversity you can read my Fic called Meta(In)stability. It's a RWBY X RVB crossover. It's also a jaune-centered fic.

    Ch 10 Wattpad Rant
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    Reborn as The War God
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    I crash down in front of Ghidorah in just the right time. Mothra was about to be blasted out of existence, and I don't want the pretty girl to suffer!
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    Abyssal Phoenix - Multiverse
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Commented

    Stanky breath

    'DEATH BREATH?'
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    Abyssal Phoenix - Multiverse
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Commented

    Giving an abominable intelligence control over your body?

    [Notice: growth pains have started to get severe, would you like to give temporary control of your body to me to fully assimilate the energy while avoiding the pain?]
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    Abyssal Phoenix - Multiverse
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  • Nxgen_Snail_Kota
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    Tbh I completely forgot that birds don't reproduce Asexually.

    I stand up and look at my immediate surroundings. I'm in a nest made of several different grasses from around me, there's no eggs which is good. I'd rather NOT have sex with a bird. I'm normal sized while gigantic creatures are all around me… Hmmm….
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    Abyssal Phoenix - Multiverse
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