Pampuch_zdenko

It has potential, I will see what happens next and hoe the story develops. I will update this review later.

the only piece of scum is that cold b..ch, that thinks she is better then everyone else.

no antibiotics and bandages just vitamins? seriously?

Author, Well done! keep it Up! This is the first novel that made me to create a review. It is realy amazing. Reading this slower story progression novel without nonsens filler chapters just to unnaturaly prolong the story is refreshing. There are still some things that can get better in my oppinion, but since the story is still in the beggining Author probably plans to add it over time. Pros: Nice slower story progression that is not boring at all. More details on crafting(alchemy) not just, fight, get stronger, fight rutine. Unique compared to other novels you will read it in one breath Cons: Not much realy, short for now, especcialy with the slow progression this novel will shine brightly after 400+ maybe 500+ chapters I am one of those readers that hates when there is a chapter from the point of side character instead of MC, that you dont care about, this is not an issue here cause everything is from MC perspective BUT! this meens side characters are shallow and you dont care about any at all. Since is slow paced a bit more chapters per week would be great. Suggestions: Add few chapters with side characters as main BUT make them talk about the MC or do things for him. So it will not be just a filler chapter and it will be still about MC but it will help us get to know the character of side characters :) Romance, this realy need slow progression romance with one or 2 females with a twist or tragedy. (I hope you already plan something like it to make story deeper) Since he is alchemist maybe you can get To more details with herbs collecting too or make him build his own special herb garden that he can improve and care about, that will add so much envy with eldes and lots of content + world building. I hope you like this review.