nonamerihad

So far I quite like the story.It has some grammar mistakes but it's like one spelled wrong in the whole chapter, so ot doesn't ruin the experience.The timeline is original, it's set right before the Rocks pirates form. The story's pace is also good, it doesn't feel forced like some fanfiction I read. The main character is like 7 years old and gets some decent character development which I quite like along with the other main character currently in the story. The author sets up chapters and arcs for the future quite nicely as well.And the system is barely there which I like since most fanfictions make the system too op. Overall the story so far is quite good.