Twilighflame

One of the worst chapters I've ever read.

What's wrong with you author? You're now writing about love interests being raped? Increasingly disappointing.

I READ TO 186 CHAPTER. Positive Aspects: *Good romance. In my opinion, it's the best part. *Decent +18 scenes. Nothing extraordinary. *There is no system. Negative Aspects: *Protagonist with average intelligence. It seems to decrease as the chapters go on. *Chapters contain many grammatical and ortographics errors, etc. Not quite MTL level, but still annoying. *World-building. I know almost nothing about the world even after 200+ chapters. *Fights. The battles are nothing special. Tags Found: Neteroi , Anti-hero Protagonist. Regarding the first tag, the MC's behavior is a bit confusing. He gets involved with women who are already in relationships, but the nature of these relationships is never clearly defined, which is frustrating. They just seem like friends with benefits, which is annoying because these women are very powerful and have interesting backgrounds. What a waste...

I can't stand it anymore. Why, author, did you make Maya marry that idiot Jin? I don't understand anything. If she's so strong, then why did she choose him? This is where I stop, folks—I don't know why I expected so much from this novel...

Author-san, please answer me the following question. Will Maya ever become part of the harem at some point? Because, as I see it, they just seem like friends with benefits. Honestly, I don’t understand why she is married to that idiot "Brother Jin." That is one of the things that annoys me the most about the novel. You never really define this relationship...

I've kept this novel on standby for a long time. To be honest, I only unlocked these specific chapters when I heard about them just to see if the NTR thing was true. I don't know the world, nor the MC's personality, and I only know a little about the female characters. In short, these chapters have shown me how to throw away characters with potential. Well, did I mention this was on standby? Well, now it won't even be in my library. Good luck, author...

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What can I say? NTR is a matter of perspective. If the author writes the story from the point of view of a character who is being stolen from, it’s netorare, but if the story is told from the perspective of the one doing the stealing, it’s netori. For that reason, the author has an unhealthy obsession with placing us in the perspective of the protagonist when his waifus are taken away. It’s an unfunny joke. Another element the author uses to make the story work is the complete removal of the hero’s intelligence. Even young children and the dumbest animals have a sense of selfishness that drives them to take the best for themselves and prevent others from taking it. However, the author removes this from the protagonist so that his self-insert, known as León, can exist in his little decadent world. In the end, the only thing I like about this story is the "lemons." Author, maybe you should write less NTR and focus on developing your skills instead (you have potential).

God I feel like crying. Why didn't I find this first than the other? . Well, I think I'll delete the review I made on the other version. PS: Author, it would be a good idea if in the NTR version you put in the synopsis that says that you have a version without NTR. It would have helped me a lot :´´v. Please update often..