Ruby Green Eyes? I don't think that make sense. Did you mean emerald green

So they are gonna attack in new York at a business that both tony and the fantastic 4 have stakes in. I doubt tony and reed would sit still and let it happen.

Too those who are looking at this story and thinking that's it might be good do yourselves a favor and don't read this disappointment. This story was good and had a lot of potential from ch1-20 it was good and showed great potential, so it more infuriating how it takes a nose dive the next 10 chapters. for starters the biggest red flag is the fact that the MC has multi personalities being created as personas in his body. now I've yet to see a webnovel that does this concept at all well that doesn't just ruin the story and here yes it ruins the story. the author tried defending it but if so many people are saying it's stupid maybe just maybe they have a point. As if that wasn't enough and you continued reading it gets worse as the next world his personality it practically wiped and he forgets who he is. thats the point I gave up on this novel went downhill from ch 20 onward and kept falling. Author if your reading this you majorly f***** up. I don't care enough anymore to continue reading this story whether 10-20 chapters down the road it's all explained it doesn't matter cause those 20 chapters are not gonna be well received. you commented regularly about people calling things stupid if it's that bad maybe you should look at why. if the concept is s*** and hated whether it makes sense or not people won't like it and judging from chapter comments a lot of people dropped this early on.

you know a ***** pov sub titles wouldn't go amiss and would help with keeping up with the shifting locations and people. just a recommendation

Great novel and most certainly better than it competition, some things I will advise the author to do though Add **** pov so we know who is talking let us see some other lords POV and not just governers. I want to see Li Yu POV since he seems like the cliche chinese lord and we know it isn't going well due to the protagonist.

I wanted to like this I really did and it got of to a very strong start. buuuut in the words of some commenters you can remove the marvel parts and the story won't be any different. by around chapter 20 theres percy jackson and i swear half the chapters after that revolved around that part of the world then were back to marvel for about 5 chapters until were of to another world. The biggest complaint about this story is the fact it straight up lies to people and for the first 10 or so chapters fools people into thinking this is a marvel fanfic but it isn't so don't read this hoping for a marvel fanfic because it ain't.

I was thinking more heroes of might and magic. The resources are identical to it.

I don't know about marvel but i would say just go with gungnir as it's odins spear in mythology.

You've done well so far so keep it up the only complaint I have is how you've done the love interest. the fact that it was introduced through the system as a mission makes it feel forced especially considering there first encounter. you should of had it occur more naturally cus now it feels like xyrus is unnaturally trying to form a love connection and it all feels artificial and out of character.

not trying to be mean but have you read up to the half way point of that one. It goes of the rails by the halfway point and loses whatever plot it had, It's not a dxd fanfic it spends %80 of it in a new world without any memory.

Depends what your looking for (as issei hyoudou with a twist) looks promising (ultimate gacha system hyoudou issei) (Life in dxd) (sign in highscool dxd) (heavens new joker) (dxd the innocent gamer) (male reader as rimuru in highschool dxd) These are the ones I can remember for now.

calling it a 6 clover grimoire would be stretching it but at the same time I couldn't describe that properly either.

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You know I hope we don’t end up being number 4 then on the last day drop to 6th that would be insulting

If your still taking recommendations for the empowerment I have an idea for apocalypse. Palace of the end- an evolution of the tower. number of pillars xx Shattered halo- the palace doesn’t just absorb halos of existences it can save them and utilise the broken halos to boost the power of the domain and Vassals the number of halos that can be used depends on the amount of pillars of the palace. Black hole- by burning the star of conquest and the evolvability of apocalypse lead to the creation of a new ability called black hole. within the domain the black hole can absorb the essence of edicts and beings within the domain.

You know I imagined something funny and I hope adui will implement this just for a joke at least. I imagined a primordial or something that has abstained for millions of years and got special title and powers from it, I want to see this just for a laugh and refrence to the saying that if your a virgin at xx year you get magic.

I'm not so angry about her being arrogant i'm more annoyed that the same is happening for the 4th time in a row. I would be wholly satisfied if by the end he ends up beating her within a inch of her life or killing her but i'm predicting its going to repeat again

If what Adui has hinted at is true he would be found out before he could get past a reality as they would possess taboo edicts that could find him out. So it still doesn't make sense as if he did he would be giving the primordial a lot of information especially since they could get to victoria and what not.

I hope he doesn’t take the invitation one reason is he is a being being hunted by pretty much every primordial and walking into a cardinal bloodline seems like the dumbest thing he could do even with dictum emperor. Not to mention it would be repeating the same cycle that has genieve becoming a harem member after he displays his dominance and after she acts arrogantly. it was the same the past 3 times this would be the 4th in a row.

Question is Runinations EoR generation based on Cosmic days or can he cheese it through time dialation