It has a great beginning with the story. The author has meticulously explained the dire situation in which mc was placed. It awoke pity for the people in that world as well as mc's family.

what a great start 💥

turned vampires or human-converted vampires can do with human food for two or three days.

So much energy 😮

beautiful description 😍

There is a danger in Sophia's path. She better stay with Edward 😊

Edward learnt magic during his hundred years of the vampire ship. He rarely uses his magic, but when he uses it, no one can deny him being the most powerful vampire of time.

just like the vampire diaries : damen and stefen

I like the author's choice of vocabulary. The most interesting aspect of the story was keeping a simple starting and building a twist in between. I wish him goodluck for Wsa 😊

she is kind and understanding.

The word choice of the author is perfect! No one can deny that the beginning of the story is so interesting that it leaves readers going in-depth reading the tale. The author has a higher chance of taking off his book, provided he writes more engaging chapters.

wait and watch😅

yes😅

banging means slamming or hitting

The sound is beautifully described ☺☺

what's happening 😲😲

I have several tools to eradicate grammatical errors. I proofread my story every 10 chapters and make them error free.

yes😅

But this story has a twist and readers will get a shock in the upcoming chapters. So, keep reading 😊😊