LarcsytSalu
when I come across typos or wrong word choice/phrase, I mention it using: "*corrected*" instead of "reg"; *corrected; reg ⏭ corrected My way of assisting non-native English authors sound more fluid
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LarcsytSalu4dCommentedwhen 1st introduced in last chapter his name was Yuening, but now it's Yue Ning. was it spelled incorrectly all of chapter 3? or is it misspelled this chapter?
After Yue Ning gnawed through two steamed corn breads, he was still a bit hungry, but with the grain bin at home nearly empty and the remaining supplies dwindling, he needed to eat sparingly.- LarcsytSalu22dCommented
*his eyes *his face *He invited
"Don't mind them, they're just rough guys with no manners," Parfit said, her eyes red, but a smile on her face. She happily invited Kestrel to check out the room they had prepared for her. - LarcsytSalu22dCommented
cleared *his* throat
Parfit, standing behind Kestrel, cleared her throat loudly, and the alphas quickly pulled their hands back. The last time a beta visited them, she was scared off by their half-beast forms. - LarcsytSalu24dCommented
alpha in front of *her
Kestrel found that the alpha in front of him had a powerful body and incredible fighting skills. Most importantly, he could keep up with every little shift in her mental state. It was like they were swimming in the sea together, not needing words, each feeling the other's small thoughts through the waves. He could feel and act with powerful skill, as if he could read her mind. - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
ask *her* classmate
Kestrel wanted to seriously ask his classmate what feeling bummed was like, but she knew she shouldn't. - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
😂😂😂
Chen Gong smiled faintly: "It's the bullfrog's 'bull'!" - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
thought it said in an earlier chapter that she was 27 yrs old
"I'm only 26 years old!" - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
at the beginning of this chapter it said he'd reached 8,000 points, so howd'dhe suddenly gain an extra 1,000 points ?
Suddenly, Chen Gong had a thought, "Can the chance to draw be exchanged for 1000 points, or rather, can I use the 9000 points I have, along with this chance, to do a ten-draw?" - LarcsytSalu26dCommented
what instead of wat
Hanson was happy Ren listened to him, as this change might make life a bit easier for Ren. He knew Ren must have had a tough few years. Now Hanson just wondered wat kind of sad things could change a happy person into someone so quiet and serious. - LarcsytSalu28dReplied to Taramaki
last I checked Patel was pronounced [PUH] + [TEL] & Petal was pronounced [PET] + [UHL]
"You don't have to protect me when I'm inside." Patel said using the ASL language. - LarcsytSalu29dCommented
officer *thought* the feeling
For a moment, the officer though the feeling was just an illusion, because she soon heard Kestrel's unhesitating answer, "Got it." - LarcsytSalu29dCommented
thought *she* heard
Already far from the yard and climbing the stairs, Kestrel suddenly thought he heard something and turned around. - LarcsytSalu29dCommented
OMG he got "Unconventional Points" this time instead of " Abnormal Points"
[Ding! Unconventional Points +100!] - LarcsytSalu29dCommented
I love how he points this out!!!!
"Senior, patients won't get sick following the textbook." - LarcsytSalu29dCommented
is it weird that I would do that sort of thing as well??
The library was supposed to be officially back at work tomorrow. Everyone came in today for a bit of tidying up, and this guy... just followed them in and borrowed books. - LarcsytSalu1mthReplied to zeptaras
they're calling the marrying of 1 son into 2 households to extend the lineage, Jian Xiao, after that Duke's son we ho was permitted to do such a thing first
Once this happened, many in the commonfolk began to follow suit. And since the scholar father also had no son, Jian Xiao naturally fell upon the eldest brother. - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
and she's not even tied to that beam! !🤣🤣🤣🤣
In the courtyard, Yang Kun and the bride had completed their wedding ceremony. At this time, they heard a crack... The roof beam seemed to have loosened. Jiang Xi's ability as a psychic was beginning to show! - LarcsytSalu1mthReplied to DaoistFsH6Sm
Yang Fen's elder brother probably gave them lots of money so his son, Yang Kun, wouldn't have to do without too many things that he was accustomed to during the time that he was being raised by Yang Fen & her family… which imo was probably a lot more money than her family was used to, thus they managed to live a bit better during that time as well
Jiang Shan pulled Yang Fen over and said in a deep voice, "Mother, Yang Kun was the one who let our younger sister down first. Why are you admitting your mistake? "It was all their fault for being incompetent and having to rely on Yang Shaoqun for a living. That was why they had to personally attend the wedding to congratulate the couple even though she had suffered such a great grievance. At the thought of this, the Jiang brothers' expressions turned ugly. - LarcsytSalu1mthReplied to Logan_Kinnlm
hung is correct since it's past tense of hang
Her second brother, Jiang Er, and her third brother, Jiang Shan, also said a few words to Jiang Xi, but Jiang Xi did not pay much attention to them. It was not until Yang Fen closed the door and was about to leave that Jiang Xi slowly came back to her senses and said slowly, "It's my ex-fiancé's wedding. I have to go and congratulate him." Jiang Xi's face was expressionless. Even a mental patient knew how to be polite. Jiang Xi did not know why she wanted to go, but she just felt that he should go! - LarcsytSalu1mthCommented
I think Yang Fen is the widow not her daughter
Yang Fen did not dare to overthink it. Her daughter, Jiang Xi, was now famous for being a widow. If there were more rumors about her, she would not be able to get married. Her mother-in-law was already at odds with her because of this. She disliked Jiang Xi more and more. After all, she was a monster who had hung herself three times and still did not die! Who knew what she had on her?