Noven_1145

Is the author paying you to lick his 6*IIs?

The author has the writing ability of a squirrel. This story is interesting but it has absolutely NO sense of logic whatsoever. I'm not even 30 chapters in and mc is being treated like an adult even though he's just a kid. author does not gave the ability to write. Please give it up. 🙏🏻

Of course. Please take my words into consideration and do not be offended. The negative reviews are here for you to learn from, at least the constructive ones. Best of luck .

Trash. It's not worth reading. The quantity of plotholes is too high, fck with how dense the plotholes are within a single chapter i could form a fcking blackhole. The progress is not proportional to reality. He should not be progressing so slowly. Author is just trying to drag out the story.. dissapointing... 0/10. I can't give it a 0 but you get the lowest rating there is, a 1. Don't give ur MC op abilities if you're not gonna let him abuse it. And if you're not gonna let him abuse it, don't do i through plot holes??! At least explain the reason why!? don't leave it up to us. Why is his progress so freaking slow? I'm done. Just a waste of time. You want an mc with slow progress you don't give him an op system. This ruined the story for me. It just gets so irritating. Plus u get an L/10 for botting reviews. Loser.

Subpar writing quality, subpar character design, great world background, good story development. But it got boring real fast when you started info dumping. MC is edgy and not befitting someone who survived true horrors. MC also suffers from a major case of pushover syndrome. It is greatly dissapointing and does not live up to the potential it showed in the first 120 chapters. 👎🏻

If I'm going to be honest. This story sucks you in, it's great, you know? It really just sucks you in and you really feel .. i don't really know how to describe it, its good and I know that. The only real complaint i have is a personal one and not something about your writing quality. Honestly I really prefer overpowered/ relatively strong mc's. I know that for most, it feels more fulfilling when you see a hard-working MC gain power. VS an OP MC. But i just can't really get myself to like weak-to-strong stories. This is again no more than personal preference and in no way a criticism of your writing. I'm normally really critical, but i just can't find something to dislike. The characters don't feel like characters; they feel like real people. It's as though the scene is happening before my very eyes. The world building is fabulous, though the concepts aren't exactly original. I can't complain about that, I'd prefer it if they weren't. The writing quality is top-notch as it reads like a professionally written story. The plot is great, though I can't exactly comment much on the plot and the world building because I'm barely 20 chapters in.

Amazing story although theres much more to do and to see. I'm really excited to see how future events will occur and what will happen. I love the world building especially Great job author!

It's so perfect, i loved it. I teared up at the ending. It's a fabulous story. Now I'm gonna feel empty for a while fuck I'm sad 😭 but I think I like the ending. I'd like it if you wrote a sequel, please? Thanks

bad...................... jajajajakakakajkaahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahaahahahahahahahhahahaahahahahahahahahaha like this is the worst thing I've ever EVER READ don't waste ur time pls

That would also be my response