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  • StarCreature
    StarCreature2yr
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    When I read the first chapter I already lost interest there's no ".." dialogue which is confusing and seeing he accept easily the system and reincarnated into a new world I know this leads to bad character development, at least show us his mood, his though orwhat happening around him. But I still give it chance then I review...

    Ch 2 Chatper 1 (Activate the system)
    altalt
    Game of Thrones and Domination System
    TV · GGilgamesh
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  • StarCreature
    StarCreature2yr
    Replied to Lord_Tobi

    That's why you can't understand women.

    When the girls said that she was alright, it was without a doubt the girl wasn't alright.
    altalt
    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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