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NeperZi2yrCommentedCh 1 1- NeperZi2yrReplied to CanemCaelesti999
wysi
This paragraph has been deleted. - NeperZi2yrCommentedCh 5 Balance the World? How Naive
- NeperZi2yrReplied to GingerClanger
this is fantasy (insert gift)
He could see that Sahee was quickly getting exhausted with time, it's been around 3 days since the bear incident and he knew that they must have gotten bored and started walking, what if he went back and they saw him along with Sahee? - NeperZi2yrCommented
they*
"There is also a contestant from the Elephant tribe, this is considered quite strange as Elephant tribesmen are pacifists, why would he join such a contest?" - NeperZi2yrReplied to InHisNameCh 8 Revenge
- NeperZi2yrCommented
similar to the 3 hokage?
Sahee became less agitated after she heard about the Shu mushroom, she cared deeply about the leader of the tribe because of two reasons, he was strong enough to protect the whole tribe and he was wise and gentle with all of the tribesmen, when she was younger, the leader even helped her around with chores that she couldn't do due to her weak body, she saw him as a big brother and she cared about his wellbeing quite a bit. - NeperZi2yrCommented
so he already wasted 2 life?
After Felix finished his meal he smelled the other two carcasses which were his former bodies, but he wasn't interested in them, he felt sleepy and he didn't want to sleep on the cold hard ground of the forest so he climbed a tree. - NeperZi2yrCommentedCh 8 Chase
- NeperZi2yrCommented
shikamaru I that you!?
"How troublesome...!" Lyrica cursed aggressively as she started panting almost immediately. - NeperZi2yrCommented
lol
When he finishes saying this his eyes become teary. Then suddenly the window breaks and a bullet pierces his abdomen. - NeperZi2yrCommented
it's very good but the extra 3 life thing just take me out of the experience, it doesn't feel like the mc is in danger. if you compare to solo leveling the mc doesn't have extra life and it feels more intense, there's this dangerous aspect of it that keep the reader engage in the battle scene. but overall it's a good start. đ
Ch 3 First Fight - NeperZi2yrReplied to Goldrai
what's ICBM?
This paragraph has been deleted. - NeperZi2yrCommented
lol
The young man took out his night vision goggles and looked at the girl's face before trailing over the rest of her body. Shaking his head and pulling off the goggles, he pondered for a moment before making a decision. "It's good she is safe. After hearing the Sergeants report today, I found it highly odd, which was why I came to take a look myself. But what I do not get is that she doesn't have a single wound on her body. It is completely flawless.., No, No⌠Aiden, get your head out of your dick." - NeperZi2yrCommentedCh 8 The Residents
- NeperZi2yrReplied to Theweird1Ch 1 RE: Chapter 1: Beginning