Can't wait to read more, hope you're enjoying the holiday season!

Been really enjoying the novel. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]

appreciate the input, yeah was thinking of touching on the academy period with flashbacks now and then, also planned on having some supporting nobility down the road. Probably touch on it a bit in volume three, finished writing volume two yesterday just have to go back and edit the drafts.

I was hoping people would like the accents <3

thanks I must have missed that in editing :D

Very well written, found a few typing errors here and there but they didn't take away from the story at all. suggest going back and finding them whenever you have free time. First book i've read on here that made me feel emotion for the characters being written about. Can't wait to see what happens with Lucan and hope to see Iris in the future. :D

Really enjoyed reading this will have to come back when you have more chapters available :D

theres a couple spots here where the word conscience is used, i think the word you meant to use was consciousness. could be wrong though

right in the feels :D

Really feel bad for Iris, she was a good person but her situation destroyed her.

hopefully that unfit abusive parent got what he deserved

nice teacher, a lot of them will just ignore a situation like that considering it to much of a hassle.

absolutely beautiful description

Really liked how you explained the mafia's organization early on usually when I come across a term I don't know anything about google it. Your characters are well written and the story development keeps readers interested. There are typing errors here and there but don't take away from the story much (haven't had to re-read sentences a few times till I get it). Will definitely be back to read more in the future, excellent work. :D

really like persephone, despite being scared she doesn't let her captors know in such a bad situation.

:D this was a really good chapter, couldn't stop reading it

did a really good job on the villains :D

not sure if it was intentional or not but this line is repeated twice.

really like the explanation at the end not really familiar with mafia terms.

thanks for the explanation was going to google it lol