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In earlier chapters the droid was BB-7 and now VV-7. Mistake? Or did the Name Change?
The dialogues are are too much AI. Would be something you could improve. It just does not sound like how a normal conversation goes. Otherwise the story is alright.
Truly stupid gifts.
You wrote here he reaches 150 years of age, yet later say he studies magic for centuries.
Yeah, i also noticed that. Staeting the 12 chapter there will be time skips and the pacing will be faster.
No Harem. Haven't decided if there will be Romance
Yeah electric Most planes have them
Fixed.
No. Lexie has a sister
Yeah. Thanks for pointing that out