See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

🤔 sorry for nagging... don't really mean to, but there's something not adding up with this sentence. 😊

Love your story! Can't wait to read/"see" what will happen next! I have some guesses but I'll keep quiet for now.

Great story! Once you start reading it, the plot, the carefully designed characters and the fantastic story structure just makes you fall in love with it. Can't wait to read/see what will happen next! Talented writer! Keep up the good work!

"other" ? Where it reads "either"?😊

"it" instead of "if" 😊