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Lazormenot

Lazormenot

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2021-07-16 JoinedGlobal
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Replied to x_ice_rose_x

    That was my inspiration XD

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    God Rank Isn't For Me!
    Sci-fi · Lazormenot
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Posted

    The words are too difficult for me to understand so that means that it's good. The story development is really good. I would most likey continue to read this after I finish my current novel.

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    Dark Sword
    Fantasy · x_ice_rose_x
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Posted

    At first the words were too difficult for me (English is my second language). After a while of reading I got interested in the plot. The characters are awesome I fully believe that. But this genre is not what I usually read or like. But I do recommend it to reader who like contemporary romance. The vibe is too deep for my own taste.

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    Morphing Iniquity
    Teen · Tailrs ink
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Replied to Hebry_Kyan

    Thank you

    Ch 1 The System?
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    Life In System
    Fantasy · Lazormenot
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Replied to Peeliboob

    It's out!

    Ch 1 The System?
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    Life In System
    Fantasy · Lazormenot
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Posted

    I am bias on myself so I am goving 5 stars. Oh and I will be releasing 2 chapter everyday and also if the support button is available, every 300 power stone will be 1 extra chapter. I also hope you can help me by commenting and telling me where I got wrong.

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    Life In System
    Fantasy · Lazormenot
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Commented

    I like the concept! Hope to see new chapter

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: First load
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    Death Game Dating System
    Urban · DXHaseoXD
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Commented

    you could write (Hello host,) instead of putting 2 commas in one sentence

    The voice once again sounded in his mind, "Hello, host, you have been chosen for the Doki Doki Dating System as the Goddess of Love has felt sorry for you after looking over your life. Before the system issues a quest, please save your current state as a precaution."
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    Death Game Dating System
    Urban · DXHaseoXD
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  • Lazormenot
    Lazormenot2yr
    Commented

    You could write suddenly appeared but it's good

    Lin Fan had been sitting in front of his computer playing his favourite dating sim when he suddenly heard this voice in his head. The worst thing was that he was at the best part when this voice suddenly sounded.
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    Death Game Dating System
    Urban · DXHaseoXD
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