Lazormenot
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At first the words were too difficult for me (English is my second language). After a while of reading I got interested in the plot. The characters are awesome I fully believe that. But this genre is not what I usually read or like. But I do recommend it to reader who like contemporary romance. The vibe is too deep for my own taste.
you could write (Hello host,) instead of putting 2 commas in one sentence
You could write suddenly appeared but it's good