similar to canon means that he is wearing orange, and i Kind of highly doubt, that what is so far betrayed of this Naruto. that he would wear that obnoxious orange jumpsuit

I think you may have skipped a few chapters ahead or something.

he had children though, by the obvious show of descendants in the anime so I don't know why he wouldn't. unless he was a detached either (which fits)

4 chapter in, and overall it seems to have a strong idea. but definitely not strong with dialogue or some minor spelling errors. But I am definitely liking it so far, keep up the good work.[img=recommend]

Honestly, I am really pumped for the next chapters, this has a good quality of grammar and is easily enticing to readers. especially the few who enjoy The Legend of Zelda. 10/10

Honestly, I am deeply in love with this fanfiction, and can not wait till the next chapter comes out, I actually love the way you have protrayes Madaras character. i have had the same problem with people unhappy that ive written an character different when ive specifically stated that they only have their appearance and abilities. Regardless your doing great, I cannot wait for the next volume

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Sorry im actually working On it right now ive just been so busy with reality that i havent been able to sit down In front of a screen for a while now