Ster_Bern

definitely worth continuing.

It can already be taken as mind control, to make you forget your family... It's disgusting. I'll leave it at that.

And at least once, the author did not kill the family.

Read what I wrote again. The starting point is broken. The universe must collapse if he really returned to the past and became a teacher of himself. This is the first one. Secondly, how did he initially get to the level of an adult Orion, if you didn't show the starting point. The point where Orion first learns by himself, and then only moves into the past. You blew up the whole universe in paradoxes, and broke the chronology of events. You don't even understand what I'm talking about)), what difference does it make if he absorbed the memories or not? How did the First Orion get to his current level of power, without his senior incarnation? How many universes had to collapse for the sake of this moment? You just made a path to nowhere. And there is no travel to the past, only to a parallel reality with a different time frame. And the past reality just ends.

If he's learning from the medallion, then the Merlin-Orion shouldn't be there at all. because the chronology of events should not be disrupted for a long time, if it is disrupted, then Orion fell into a parallel universe, and his universe either collapsed or this one will collapse.

If Merlin is not there, how does Orion have such knowledge? Then who taught him in the first place? Author, you've broken the logical chain and are essentially burying your book, the medallion doesn't solve anything at all, you've lost point 0 and point 1. You just took the whole book and buried it, it would be better if you didn't get into time loops. If Merlin was not there, then there was no knowledge of the laws and methods of their knowledge, there was no knowledge of death and so on. So Merlin just has to be. At the original point, Orion either had to learn from the medallion and then go back in time every time, which you didn't show in the book, or there had to be a real Merlin. But for now, it's stupidity.

Clearly, another abandoned job. R.I.P.

Clearly, another abandoned job. R.I.P.

Another interesting abandoned job

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