clone04

there has no significant push to the story, just this dragging on for no damn reason is so infuriating, hes just posting here not to get backlash otherwise mans just gonna dump everything on pa*eron man

authors cliffhangers and edging should be taught in schools. bro on that pa**ron grind gg ive mostly lost all interest

Bros just farmin reaction and trying to get pater0n subs

arent they kids why she talking like shes a woman?

What accident ?

I been saying this since earlier bros gone to his head thinks that whatever he’s giving us we just take it without any reason all this prelude for what just takes out the Essence of the whole story This whole scene is taken for 4-5 chapters for no reason

Flow is great but please add chapters faster [img=update]

my final opinion about this fanfic is that it was great in the beginning but now author just shills his pat*ron and makes this random ass cliffhangers with no use story wise and just want people to go to his pat*ron, liked this story before now is just a cash grab, not gonna read this anymore. Also removed my comment from the last chapter with the same complaints, if Ur gonna shill just own it up don't delete comments,

this book sucks. unnecessary cliffhanger just ruin the story flow. this author just want pateron money why the f are u even posting on webnovel man just put ur whole book there.

so is inner peace basically like bullet time?