It was brilliant the language and choice of words and story line everything was amazing so keep it up waiting eagerly for the next part post soon

As usual the language was brilliant and so was the story line....waiting for the next part eagerly....keep it up 👍 😃😊

The story is getting more interesting with every part and seems real and i always appreciate the choice of words and the language so keep it up and am waiting for the next part

As usual the stry goes on beautifully and the choice of words keeps getting better am rly excited for the next part so keep it up 👍😃😊🙂

The story line was great as always and the choice of words too it really makes a great pass time story and it is getting really interesting so keep it up

As usual it was gr8....and as always the language was so good especially the choice of words and the story too is good so keep it up 👍😃

It was great as always as i say the language is very good and the storyline too tho so keep it up as they do make a great time pass and waiting for the next part

Yet another gr8 one..hope its a yes...it was rly good and they make a gr8 time pass so keep it up 👍😃😊

It was really a great story...the language specially was very captivating and of course the story line so keep it up writing these stories they make a great time pass

It was rly good...specially the words ...well chosen....keep it up 😃😊👍

It was a really good story and i am eagerly waiting for the next part to come as soon as possible and just keep it up like this writing good stories which make a really good time pass

Rly gr8 and eagerly waiting for the next part so keep it up 👍👍☺️....

It was a great story really and i am eagerly waiting for the next part to come as soon as possible and am really excited to see what happens next so keep it up

A gr8 plot....and interesting.... eagerly waiting for the next part..... keep it up 👍👍☺️

Yet another gr8 stry... and i guess its her parents at the door....just a wild guess..... Am am eagerly waiting for the next part... Keep it up 👍👍☺️

It was a really great story just like a real life experience like it really happens when you are about to confess your feelings to someone so it was a great feeling reading such a story and i am eagerly waiting for the next part to come as soon as possible

I think its a big fat yes...it was great really....so keep it up 👍👍👍

I think that the camera captured the spirit of the little girl who was mentioned before.....who didnt respond to her smile....well i just think But it was rly gr8....keep it up 👍👍

It was really interesting and good more like a real life experience the plot was really good and enjoyable and for sure i am eagerly waiting for what happens next in the story and keep it up it is a good pass time reading these self made stories whixh are really interesting to reading

It was a rly good story.....kind of a real life experience...the plot was rly good and enjoyable....and also am eagerly waiting for what happens next