cuttlefish146

I have not stopped reading, I just wanted new readers to be aware of what to expect, and though the problem with the characters being called by the wrong gender does get a bit confusing and irritating at times I still enjoy the story! The only thing I can recommend it to ask someone to proof read the chapters.

I have read 150 chapters, and though the story is interesting and well thought out(only minor plotholes) the writing quality is bad, especially when it comes to keeping the gender the same and names for realms(kingdoms? idk). I have not read a single chapter that has not made the mistake of either saying "...boy.. something" and then in the same paragraf refer to him as her or where kingdoms are called realms, or realms called kingdoms.

30'000 x 10 = 300'000* not 3 million

What does this even mean? Such a weirdly written condition.

only for the what?... neck? I am thoroughly perplexed about it could be.

from a few seconds* to five minutes

uncle lotus*? why would Mars call himself uncle while speaking to someone else? or am i missing something?

Thanks for the chapter!

Good cap!