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the writing quality is good, I haven't seen any noticeable grammatical error until now. the story holds potential with the mc's race which I shall not spoil and the different skills, for the characters we are only introduced to the mc for now who is fairly intresting and we don't really know much of the wider world but what we have seen is intriguing., the author updates regularly so there's that.

the world building is ok, we haven't explored much for now and I don't find anything really problematic, it updates regularly so there's that. characters for now aren't that good other then the mc who feels slightly better, the plot is quite intriguing as the premise is repeated reincarnation in the same world, no flaw for now. but the quality of writing is not good, randomly the gender change from he to she, the name of the martial arts change from one to another etc etc, it feels like a bad translation, in dire need of editing.

dire need of editing

mr. author you really need to sort out the power realms, every one is not in the innate realm are they?, you are using innate realm even in the place of acquired realm, quality takes a hit that way

The story is a great piece of work about a son and a mother. The parallels drawn are good. MCs understanding and his growth through the various stages of life is phenomenal.

the story is an exquisite piece about a son and a mother , the parallels drawn are good , the thing that the protagonist understand and his growth as his life goes is phenomenal.

who is amon

i have read till ch 18 1. updates have been stable 2. world background we haven't been exposed to much so let's give him benifit of doubt 3.its you cliche transmigration but not at the same time how ? 1. well many people know he transmigarated 2. he doesn't have an apparent cheat 3. the plot is shrouded in mystery so much infact that even author might forget to unravel some of it 4. it's power system is quite novel and different 5. there are many times i feel things are plot forced so there is that but overall it's quite good author takes suggestions so you should definitely drop some and let's give him benifit of doubt and believe that he is gonna improve 4. well the characters are in initial stages can't say much about them our mc though is a self blaming self centred pessimistic egoistic thin skinned guy and i hate him author has promised to improve him though 5. writing quality is quite good as the ideas are quite nove but cliche at the same time anyways do give it a try and tell your opinions about Claire and Eric's love story i am having clashing opinions with the author we need some more opinions

author your book is good but man it feels creepy

Author first i want to say that i really like your novel and my question is that in ch 683 he asks sia if they can make potions with the his blood ? so 1. can they make it ? 2. if they can would they become equally talented as Varian? 3. and will they be able to awaken more elements? Please answer author.