WordsmithVenerable

Hmmm, I see. I need to put more details.

I'll put that in mind. Thanks!

Past tense

I also thought of separating it. But then decided to just put it in the first chapter

The plot is great. I enjoy reading your novel. Keep up the good work. Although improvements in conversation and more details lol. Well, that's all. Goodluck!

Shameless author here! Thank you for reading my book. I just wanna say that I'm still a noob so my novel might be not that good for your taste. Anyways, if you didn't like it I wish you can leave a review on how I can improve more. Tell me your likes, dislikes, what you hate, what you want me to improve on. I really want to write for many readers to enjoy. So I'll appreciate it if you take the time to tell your thoughts about my novel.

Thank you! I will do my best to hone my writing skills and improve!

Hehe, thank you! But I know I still need some improvements to better my work. Thank you for reading!

Interesting. A first person point of view. Quite a refreshing read and the flow is nice. I enjoyed reading it however there are only few chapters. Keep updating please lol

The plot is really interesting. I know it's really hard portraying an MC that has quite a background but you did your best and I can see it from reading the novel. The pace seems nice. Some minor adjustments on the characters conversation and traits But over all I really like the book.