Uniquesoul1600
I'm a self taught digital artist, I love drawing cute critters and during my spare time I write, read and play a few games.
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I promise you that you and your cat won't have to wait too long before the next chapter gets published. I'm working ahead so that the chapter are out almost weekly [img=recommend]
forgive meeee!!! I didn't plan to get so busy but I am working on the next chapter!!
I kind of feel like this book would be better as a Third Persons Point Of View but the way you write and tell the story somehow works, so I'm like on a scale of which one but I can say that this story is interesting. I can see this becoming an anime and I'll be flipping tablets if it didn't, it just has that potential.
....if they don't go out I'm going to start flipping tables >:3
aaawww glad to know his brother is kind to him uwu
😹😹oh my gosh! I can so see this anime scene right now. Glaring at each other
The best way I can describe your novel is philosophical. It's the kind that makes you look at life a little differently and see the many perspectives it has, including the people, place, and time. I've read only one book in my life that held the same weight as this book, The Alchemist, you've done a great job author. Truly know how to stir up the emotions from your readers, mine has certainly been.
oh I didn't know this was a thing
I'm betting on mad, maybe shocked...oooh no she'll keep her distance and only address him by his status. There's so many scenarios in my head of how she'll react!!!
Sir, if I was as bold as her...I'd definitely not talk to you at all. Your royalty and I'm just a simple servant who seeks out knowledge
oof I felt that😹😹
This story is good, and only getting better. My advice would be to proofread your work. A lot of the time you tend to use brackets when expressing either emotion or action. If you're not sure how to do that, what I do is express that action or emotion in the next sentence. Hope this helps👍 keep working hard!