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Flying_ninja

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  • Flying_ninja
    Flying_ninja2yr
    Posted

    Really a good writing. Totally unique. and it's really different fro all the contemporary romance have read. Probably, it's because it seems it was written by a very intellectual person. Anyway, good work, author.

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    Morphing Iniquity
    Teen ¡ Tailrs ink
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  • Flying_ninja
    Flying_ninja2yr
    Commented

    I love this book. Totally refreshed my idea of fantasy novels

    Ch 1 REALITY: A QUESTION OF PERSPECTIVE V
    altalt
    BENEATH THE SURFACE: RISE OF THE GOD
    Fantasy ¡ KS_Loona
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  • Flying_ninja
    Flying_ninja2yr
    Commented

    I guess Jade is Dr. Deryl?

    "So it goes like this, I will not be able to tell you who you really are... Deryl... I will not be able to punish you but I pray that you pay for what you have done even in my last breath..." he whispered looking at the little child screaming, breathing heavily preparing himself for his death.
    altalt
    BENEATH THE SURFACE: RISE OF THE GOD
    Fantasy ¡ KS_Loona
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  • Flying_ninja
    Flying_ninja2yr
    Posted

    Really nice plot, I must say. Totally refreshed my idea of contemporary romance. Good work, writer. Just a little more editing in the writing style and you're good to go!

    altalt
    Morphing Iniquity
    Teen ¡ Tailrs ink
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  • Flying_ninja
    Flying_ninja2yr
    Posted

    Really love the plot. The first episode was really realistic cause this is just how broken families begin and the dad really sucks. But author, you were really great. Love it.

    altalt
    The truth about us
    Urban ¡ Ariel_x
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  • Flying_ninja
    Flying_ninja2yr
    Posted

    Nice plot. Also unique. However, the author should probably get his editor to correct the punctuation marks. Everything else is perfect and the storyline is perfect.

    altalt
    THE MAZE
    Urban ¡ _OB_
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  • Flying_ninja
    Flying_ninja2yr
    Posted

    This is so great 👍👍 The writing style is also good. It is also evident that you did quite a lot of research before writing too. Really a good read.

    altalt
    I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.
    Fantasy ¡ Andry_Reyes
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