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could you have made it a yinyang symbol made with the union of man and women
author should have said moaning
there is no such thing as traditional American English
it's sounds like a monster
author please by a good person and hooked them up
why is the mc like a pervert always thinking about women it doesn't make sense
this was Unnecessary and just ruined the mood
Daughter of the
dude please don't use spanish names in different genre it doesn't suit the novel and names from history like zeuse or Thor or its ok to use at reference but if you take take names from other stories or myth your gonna lower the quality of your great work
hey author you know I love your work but I have to say it you have a problem don't use spasm say his mouth twitched say he groaned say he moaned to the satisfying increase in strength my head heart ever time a author use words incorrectly
Author please give the mc his freedom back