Pretty decent novel, includes bunch of interesting items and abilites from many works of fiction and its just fun to see the MC interact with them all. What it was'nt fun to see the mc interact with was his sisters lips... yeah Properly tag any controversial/just weird things that happen in your novel, especially incest.

What do you mean!? you live in Alabama?

I would say the weekly updates seem like a pretty good deal as it allows us to comment on things while they're relevant and it seems to help keep some authors motivated to keep writing whitout having to really worry about whether or not people will even read, if they don't care anymore, etc... but I'm also no stranger to needing breaks, and book by book allows you to set your own time frame without feeling all the pressure that comes with a consistent schedule.

1 on 1 ... that would make him almost special grade and about on todos level but he hasnt even used black flashes yet.

how does a table shatter and send a peice of it flying so fast it takes a chunk out of someones side after falling from at most its length in height.

eh it doesnt really matter im just nitpicking but psycokinesis is the manipulation of psycic energy can be used to move things around if you wrap the object in it and move the energy around it after there are also other things like using the energy itself to form a weapon as the energy can be tangible if so chosen. telekinesis is the manipulation of matter itself so instead of moving around the psycic energy wrapped around something to make it move you just move the thing itself and in some cases no energy is required to use it but in the case it is, only your bodies energy will be used.

Isnt that just psychokinesis then? psycic energy manipulation

...what telekinesis is the remote manipulation of matter as a baseline he would not have any way of knowing or guessing how that manifests. he will be able to move things with his mind, thats all he knows why would moving things with your mind be able to create an "aura" when he cant manipulate any energy; he can only manipulate matter.

when did he get a sword

didnt stop me im numbah wun

As the nuber one fan of this novel(if you disagree one word... scoreboard) I proclaim this to be a great chapter.

here it is again, so it wasnt a mistake minutes go by hundreds here instead of sixtie.. weird

this is the single funniest thing i have witnessed ever.

This is as of now my favorite dragonball fic on this site/app. it has attained my praise due to relatively compotent storytelling which is a rarity here. the main character scaling is almost perfect, as in how long it takes to gain power is not overly exaggerated. The pacing is a bit fast as in how fast they reach places around the globe and plenty of time skips. But this is excused by it being early dragonball retelling exactly a master trains someone for a better part of a year would be a slog. The character design is good but seeing as this author only had to make a few new characters so far I cant really judge that. what I can judge is how close the author comes to recreating the characters original personalities from the source material which I have no complaints about. I.E. roshi acts mostly like roshi would, krillin acts mostly how krillin would, etc...The world background is no different from the original show so I cannto credit this author for that as that goes yo akira toriyama , as a result if i could give that portion a 2.5 i would. every chapter is exciting to read and I think this is really good work.👍

bro asked the one question no one else thought about

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So all his stats are twice as effective but now also cost double meaning nothing changed with the difficulty of acquiring stats and his stats just invisibly doubled even though visibly doubling would do the same