There is one small flaw which i've noticed while reading this novel. When Luke met lawyer Matt why didn't he acquire his super human senses this could be definitely useful. Forget about Sharp Nose. He could get Sharp Ears, Sharp Taste, Sarp Sixth Sense, etc. But he didn't. Did the author forget about it.

the novel pages had problems from chapter 873 look into it and fix it please.

story is good but but the mc is like a doormat getting bullied and shoved around and not even resisting all in all she's not ruthless enough she would rather knock out someone than kill them even when they want to kill her and are people that deserve to die and then futher down the story those guys become a pain in the ass and still doesn't kill them.

you're alive i saw a user commenting on light novel pub you got in a car crash and died. Thank goodness you're alive. This is one of the first novels i started reading that's how i got addicted to system novels. This brings back memories.

the story is good but the novel had 1434 chapters but the manhua only had 133 chapters it is clear to me the manhua got discontinued even though it says completed.

i just have one problem that the author might have fotgotten to add in the novel which is Liu Chai's quest where he is supposed to obtain Mu Zhiguang's body and only obtains his arm so he has collect the whole body in a year otherwise he fails the quest and loses the arm. Now Mu Zhiguang died when the Sea King invaded Beiqi but Liu Chai still didn't get his body i thought he got it off-screen but author still shows that Liu Chai is only using Mu Zhiguang's arm even after his death. Even after 3 years have Liu Chai is still using Mu Zhiguang's arm when he is supposed to fail the quest even when he hasn't collected the rest of Mu Zhiguang's body. Did the author make a mistake somewhere if he has please i ask you to correct it. Great Novel though.

I picked this novel because it had a system tag but there was no system and for the ntr I thought it was the mc doing the ntr not getting ntr'd but it still wasn't my cup of tea I initially thought the mc would discover what happend to his women and getting killed in front of them after the women claim they have no love for the mc while they are getting banged so the villains kill him since he outlived his usefulness and go back in time to when he was a kid years before his mother get banged so he would have more time to prepare and kill the villains and at the same time ntr them but it looks I was wrong. good story though 5 stars.

I still wished the author gave the mc access to the last 2 devil bodies. the sun law devil body and the evil captain devil body he could have fused all 10 devil bodies into an ultimate ten-headed devil way. pity

why is the author not having Persia put her points into body skills. I'm curious about their effects. Also it don't just feel right leaving it empty. I wanna see those stage no. rise

from gold farming to parkour only bubble point event hasn't been introduced.

no offense this is just like a very bad attempt at copying epic of caterpillar. Only difference is mc is a leech............................

i like the story but i don't like female lead she is too naive..............................................................................

the aurhor forgot about a certain unique skill the mc got in the world of cultivation from the devilish time unveiler which is the auraless nine sword styles

this is an amazing novel. but can anyone tell recommend me anymore of these gender bender novels. i want them to be male to female ones.....

but you guys don't need to buy the chapters you can just read this novel on the internet for free.

i think the author forgot about the bloodline side quest the mc got in chapter 65 of the novel. i went through each and every page but i couldn't find it maybe i possibly missed it. can anyone tell me which chapter the mc completes this quest in. i'm actually looking foward for the mc becoming an incubus.

the title says "birth of demonic sword" but mc is not a sword. the title is misleading......................................................