Oh My God, nice prologue girl... I'm really curious about the next chapter ❤️

What? Wait. Why did Avan immediately trust Delvin? He was a stranger who suddenly became friendly to Avan. Doesn't Delvin look weird?

Wow! You're off to a really good start. Give a little mystery about death in the forest. Very interesting! I can't wait to see the continuation of your story and see how you unravel these mysteries one by one. But, to be honest I was very sad to see Avan. He should have a fun life like the others.