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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer7mth
    Posted

    All plots are too predictable and overused, super selfish sociopath reincarnated into fiction world with system and everything and everyone bent to will and go in his ways, all of his choices of actions, be it with girls Rito, Yuto and Issei went exactly as I expected, and Jesus, in Issei case it was basically trademarks overused plot that he get killed and got his sacred gear stolen,i mean, I've seen the same cliche fan fictions many times before but this is the first time I've been able to predict everything so accurately and correctly in every chapters.

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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer7mth
    Replied to Drurlulu

    You seriously asking me this which part should i start first? This story is self fulfilling and generic as fuck or the fact that MC IS HAVING SEX WITH BOTH HIS SISTER AND HIS MOTHER! or he being generic BASTARD ASSHOLE who reincarnated into Dxd with plot knowledge or he is a fucking OP from the start or the fact that girls being sex bots for him? If this story only has one of these issues mentioned above then it still be amenable with some seriously effort but if all of these issues comes together in one story? It was beyond salvageable.

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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer7mth
    Posted

    This porn is too predictable and too self fulfilling, i am really want to see Mitarai seriously suffer consequences of his actions and get his dick cut off.

    High School DxD: Hentai Wives
    Anime & Comics · Pinto_sh
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer7mth
    Posted

    I am not gonna lie or sugarcoat it, this is one of the worst story i have ever seen..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer8mth
    Posted

    Is it too much to asked for you to be less repetition? the same plot, the same gene, the same victims(atleast in Issei's case, i have always seen him in your books and the fact that he suffers in the same way certainly doesn't help too) and Jesus! You now even plan to drag great characters like Kiana, Mei and Bronya down and want to make them into another brainless harem sex bot too?! Come on man can you atleast TRYING and putting some effort when you writing something

    Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice
    Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer9mth
    Commented

    Finally someone bringing up about kendo club!! So far i only everyone complaining about Issei should be arrested for peeking but no one said anything about group mob lynching someone to death with kendo stick!!! Ugh, double standard!!! If you asked me both parties are in the wrong here.

    Ch 7 A Fallen amongst Devils
    The Sovereign (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer9mth
    Replied to Infinite_Shadow_57

    Actually, it descript she already run out of power when Issei arrived and Riser is pretty much still in full health unfazed and nonchalant when Rias destroy his head and continue to talking like nothing happened, come to think of it, Issei kinda kind of saving her honour by giving her a noble reason to surrender instead of just getting beat up by Riser, but yeah I agree, she may leave half of peerage to die to recruit them, but she still league better than Cersei.

    Harry Potter / Highschool DxD : A deal with the devil
    Book&Literature · MeatBunKun
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer9mth
    Replied to Bananaking123

    Look like there are a lot of Issei professional haters gathering here👀, while some of haters here seem to somewhat decent here, sadly most of them come off as brats and their reasons are quite cringe-worthy👎

    Harry Potter / Highschool DxD : A deal with the devil
    Book&Literature · MeatBunKun
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer10mth
    Commented

    I hope Ddraig will be competent trainer and give up a surprise.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Gong to the training ground
    As Raiser Phoenix with Yin-Yang system
    Anime & Comics · beymad_1804
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer10mth
    Posted

    Wow, i will admit it, only a few stories manage to make me hate Mc from the start of chapter 1, look like Mc is just another generic reincarnated shit head bastard who will go around steal girls from original Mc and catch them all like a fucking pokemon, It is kind of boring premise if you asked me.

    DxD: Reborn as Astaroth
    Anime & Comics · TheMilflover
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer10mth
    Commented

    I just hope that, he won't taking somethings predictable like boosted gear, i would be disappointed if author pull that.

    Ch 58 chapter 58:"Altair, I would like you to stop the wedding of my sister.
    DxD: The Reincarnated Gamer
    Anime & Comics · Fanfiction_fan
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer10mth
    Posted

    Interesting, I will give a plus to a fact, Mc doesn't appear before canon start and kill Issei for boosted gear then collecting girls like Pokémon, btw, what is this war that about to happen in mortal world? Is this cannon? Which volume this timeline currently in?

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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer11mth
    Posted

    Isn't this basically almost the same fic with inner voice? But leaving aside that this fic basically have the same plot with your other fic aside, You should have some originality.

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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer11mth
    Posted

    I trying to give some benefit of doubt that even if plot isn't sound interesting but story would be something new but i am very disappointed, plot is pathetic and predictable, characters is shallow, protagonist is the worst and i doesn't said this because he is bad guy or villain.

    Reincarnated In High School DxD With Cheating Abilities
    Anime & Comics · AB_NANI
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer11mth
    Replied to Scarface3699

    Real reviewers? What do you mean about that?

    Transmigrated as Azazel's son in DXD(Fan-Fiction)
    Anime & Comics · GLORIOUS_SIMP
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer1yr
    Replied to Scarface3699

    To be fair, I think seeing bunches of bad DxD fanfics are worse than this, if this help filter out bad fanfics then, it is great.

    Transmigrated as Azazel's son in DXD(Fan-Fiction)
    Anime & Comics · GLORIOUS_SIMP
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer1yr
    Posted

    Author I think, i can already predict on how this story will end, can you do something interesting like reincarnated another person who know plot of this world like Riser into Issei's body? I've never seen anyone do that before. ​

    My Inner Voice Heard By Heroines
    Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
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  • Daoschemer
    Daoschemer2yr
    Replied to Zzz_808

    Maybe a protagonist who is less cheap and shallow, even if you ignore at how obnoxious and psycho he is but he is still nothing but a brat living in his dream, an insane obnoxious pervert psycho brat at that.

    Ch 18 The date is set and a weirdo messages!
    Arthur Liones in Highschool Dxd!
    Anime & Comics · lazybod
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