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Bashing Issei is not enough, and taking his Boosted Gear like countless other fanfics is overused and unoriginal. Turning Ddraig into a woman as well shows a lack of creativity and individuality. You should at least TRY to be original and imaginative!
All plots are too predictable and overused, super selfish sociopath reincarnated into fiction world with system and everything and everyone bent to will and go in his ways, all of his choices of actions, be it with girls Rito, Yuto and Issei went exactly as I expected, and Jesus, in Issei case it was basically trademarks overused plot that he get killed and got his sacred gear stolen,i mean, I've seen the same cliche fan fictions many times before but this is the first time I've been able to predict everything so accurately and correctly in every chapters.
You seriously asking me this which part should i start first? This story is self fulfilling and generic as fuck or the fact that MC IS HAVING SEX WITH BOTH HIS SISTER AND HIS MOTHER! or he being generic BASTARD ASSHOLE who reincarnated into Dxd with plot knowledge or he is a fucking OP from the start or the fact that girls being sex bots for him? If this story only has one of these issues mentioned above then it still be amenable with some seriously effort but if all of these issues comes together in one story? It was beyond salvageable.
This porn is too predictable and too self fulfilling, i am really want to see Mitarai seriously suffer consequences of his actions and get his dick cut off.
I am not gonna lie or sugarcoat it, this is one of the worst story i have ever seen..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Is it too much to asked for you to be less repetition? the same plot, the same gene, the same victims(atleast in Issei's case, i have always seen him in your books and the fact that he suffers in the same way certainly doesn't help too) and Jesus! You now even plan to drag great characters like Kiana, Mei and Bronya down and want to make them into another brainless harem sex bot too?! Come on man can you atleast TRYING and putting some effort when you writing something
Finally someone bringing up about kendo club!! So far i only everyone complaining about Issei should be arrested for peeking but no one said anything about group mob lynching someone to death with kendo stick!!! Ugh, double standard!!! If you asked me both parties are in the wrong here.
Actually, it descript she already run out of power when Issei arrived and Riser is pretty much still in full health unfazed and nonchalant when Rias destroy his head and continue to talking like nothing happened, come to think of it, Issei kinda kind of saving her honour by giving her a noble reason to surrender instead of just getting beat up by Riser, but yeah I agree, she may leave half of peerage to die to recruit them, but she still league better than Cersei.
Look like there are a lot of Issei professional haters gathering here👀, while some of haters here seem to somewhat decent here, sadly most of them come off as brats and their reasons are quite cringe-worthy👎
I hope Ddraig will be competent trainer and give up a surprise.