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SamaelDervikor1mthPostedThe narrative delves into the depths of villainy, portraying a truly monstrous character. However, it can be challenging to digest over time. Full disclosure: this work falls within the harem genre with explicit content (R-18). While the author doesn't explicitly state this, it becomes evident upon reading. Would I recommend it? Definitely not. Furthermore, additional reviews aren't necessary, as other readers have already provided ample commentary.
- SamaelDervikor1mthCommented"I… I am your subordinate, right?" Katherine then whispered; the warmth of her breaths dispersing between Riley's legs, "Let… let me serve you, please."
- SamaelDervikor1mthReplied to logan_corpuz
Cheat magic swordman
"And it's been approved." - SamaelDervikor1mthCommentedAnd now, in the mouth of that very same darkness, she was sticking out her tongue. She could feel the darkness slowly wrapping her entire body, her hairs standing on their ends as Riley's tongue wrapped around hers.
- SamaelDervikor1mthCommented"No need to be too harsh, my sweet Bell," a slightly feminine male student, who looked awfully similar to Bella, suddenly danced his way towards Riley, waving his hand all over the place before sitting at the desk in front of him, "They just do not appreciate beauty when they see one."
- SamaelDervikor1mthCommentedJacob only wore crude clothes, and he was barefoot because he didn't Decker didn't have any clothes or shoes of his size. He looked just like a wild barbarian at this moment.
- SamaelDervikor1mthCommentedThis made Jacob's appearance more apparent from his past skinny self. He had a handsome diamond shape face with amber eyes, arched eyebrows, a sharp thin nose, and thin lips. He looked like a handsome youth in his prime.
- SamaelDervikor1mthCommented
I love this. This is a natural reaction after being tortured after so long. Great job, don't overlook his madness throughout the story though.
"In the last years of my life, I found I crave my life far more than that bloodlust or anything else, as a matter of fact, and finally overcome that demon which was with me for my entire life and my bloodlust. - SamaelDervikor1mthCommented"Yet, I always had this demon deeply hidden within me, so, to keep it in check, I put my attention elsewhere, and ironically, I chose the same business which caused my mother's death: Weaponry!
- SamaelDervikor1mthPosted
Writing quality: The writing quality comes across as average; it can be captivating at times, but often exhibits a frightening superficiality. While tempted to give it 2 stars, I'm awarding 3 in hopes of improvement. Update Stability: It's really good; there's no room for complaint. Thank you for your hard work, author. Story Development: Rather sloppy. There aren't many twists and turns, and the protagonist never truly faces a mortal threat. Aside from a few somewhat innovative elements, there isn't much surprise. Character Characterization: Very poor. The protagonist lacks any trace of cunning or intelligence, appearing naive with double standards. He's not at all appealing and turns out to be just a regular guy with a frighteningly powerful "golden finger." He lacks extraordinary qualities and proves to be mediocre in all aspects. You'll notice it right away. The secondary characters are essentially poorly written and serve primarily as a decoy. World Background: The strong point of this work. There isn't much that's original, but the inventiveness behind it is truly fantastic. It's also why you'll likely find many comments describing this work as having potential.
- SamaelDervikor6mthReplied to Zergyl
I don't regret it. Even if I regret it we can't stop anymore, we've seen too much and we're intoxicated by it. Personally, I was addicted to it.
And soon I would find that it messed up my next life too. - SamaelDervikor6mthReplied to ZestalIt follows the journey of the protagonist "Leon Heartwell" as he trains and rises in power , while collecting pokemons , hmmmm I mean heroines - for his harem.
- SamaelDervikor6mthCommented
Worlok in the magus world
{ A/N :- tell me in the comments , which novel was your first and what are your thoughts on it now. } - SamaelDervikor6mthReplied to ShadowFlamePhoenixSo does that means I will meet arrogant young masters and jade beauties?!