Are there two authors to this book? the rose and Kelvin lines just became weird. their lines were building up so well until they went to Italy. Their lines are both annoying now. it feels like their Chemistry is lost now.
Kevin is a homewrecker and Savannah is an annoying idiot. you read the story a second time and you realize how annoying Savannah can be. Her words are always harsh towards Dylan and you wonder how he loved her and did everything for her.
somehow I cannot get pass the idea that Kaiden is 3 years old. His character to me is abit over the top. everytime I read his lines, I keep thinking he is a 6 year old.
Savanna is annoying in this chapter. she should learn from the number of girls that have tried to take Dylan away from her. this love lost seems long-winded.