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jia li is calling him brother and he is flirting with her..wow..I am sorry but I am confused by your story
you have mentioned incorrect names alot of time
you have mentioned phoned instead it should be called. lot of grammar mistakes
the story is getting interesting day by day.. So much emotions and swap of feelings in between Luke and Violet. love is the greatest teacher . it tought Luke to be more human and Violet to accept Luke as his own and support as well as comfort him in all possible ways.. so cute and sounds natural. I could feel the story being life of people around me and Luke and Violet as my distant friends so I know thier lives soo much
violet is not aware how it feels to love someone as she never felt when her mother died and his father cursed and behaved badly with her. but the feelings she is going through is love.. I am eager to see when see finally realizes and express it to luke