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shekhar03space16hCommentedu Don't need to mention intelligence again somehow this made it forcefull
This apocalypse wasn't going to disappear quickly, and the airport was surrounded by zombies. With Angelica's intelligence, she quickly realized that this place could become a small survivor base. So, to ensure her own safety, she had to figure out how to survive here.- shekhar03space1dCommented
is he going to be like this for the rest of the novel
"W-What!.. What is this drink?" Ethan asked again, "A fruit drink" Zara answered this time. - shekhar03space2dCommented
I will be fun if the mom can read that thought right now
But that was because his body is small and later as he grows older he can also have sex with his beautiful mother. - shekhar03space2dCommented
shota feels weird, a tiny and huge combo
After thinking this he went towards her red soft lips and started kissing them and the hand which he had placed down were also placed on her breasts and he would caress them gently and sometimes pinch them. - shekhar03space5dCommented
did he forget the watch could be evidence
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did not anyone saw it
The sight of the soul brightened up Evian's gloomy face instantly. He smiled widely as he opened his mouth and sucked it in. - shekhar03space6dCommented
i got the info dump from strange places
In the eyes of the supervisor, the lone teacher assigned to watch over the dozen mages in this class, it was the best motivation that they had seen in months. None of these students were good at self motivating, and their abilities weren't strong enough to get them a personal instructor, even one at the low level that Sergeant Rita had reached. - shekhar03space6dCommented
grab a mirror buddy
Maybe his Academy experience wasn't going to be a bad one after all. A little more height and he would catch up to his classmates. - shekhar03space6dCommented
didnt they say he has no parents
The bird was confused by the concept of a letter, but Karl wanted to write home to his parents to let them know that he was alright and settling in well at the Academy. The students wouldn't be home until the end of the school year, but he didn't recall any rule saying that they couldn't send a letter or a text message. - shekhar03space7dCommented
oh please you cant control your emotion
Ken's eyes widened in response. He didn't think that a teenager at Daichi's age would be so sharp that he could detect such a thing when he had tried so hard to hide it. - shekhar03space7dCommented
give a cold thinking skill
Ken stifled a laugh, feeling his mood improve once again. His thoughts moved back to the mission that he was forced to accept. Now that he thought about it, it wasn't such a bad thing to take a break from pitching, especially if it meant his injury would fully heal. - shekhar03space7dCommented
is he dumb?
Ken did not hesitate as he began to spam the no button to decline the mission. This had touched his bottom line, there was no way that he could take himself off the mound, especially now since he had another chance. - shekhar03space7dCommented
In the future it would be better if his thoughts didn't show on his face
Ken's face brightened up. He suddenly felt full of happiness as Daichi made his way between the desks and sat in the chair next to him. - shekhar03space7dCommented
i am embaressed for the system
[Activation Condition: Touch the object of plunder and silently think "Bring it to me."] - shekhar03space8dCommented
two baggages
"That could have been me…. Gregory died because of me!" - shekhar03space8dCommented
annoying character
As for Elena, she did not feel comfortable announcing what her skill was. After all, Zane had forced this transformation on her, and she felt like it had nearly killed her. She was in a very foul mood, and instead sat there in silence as she pouted. - shekhar03space22dCommented
didnt he have his financial account which he absorbed he can just take the hidden accounts
Pei Jinye suddenly softened his tone, "By the way, is it possible to ask the Education Department to rush the Awakener reward?" - shekhar03space22dCommented
If his will should have a bit stronger, then the character will be more likable
Pei Jinye fell silent... "Is there really no justice in this world?" - shekhar03space22dCommented
too much naiveness make mc a little smart but not make others too stupid
"What if I say... Ice Sister thinks I'm a seedling with endless potential, so she gave me a little push, would you believe that?" - shekhar03space22dCommented
I Get it you are honest but it makes him look like naive idiot it would be better if he calm reaction not arrogance and indifference mixed in it
Pei Jinye smiled "honestly," "No, I practiced with a 50-pound one for a while today, and when it felt about right, I switched to a heavier one."