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what is this op not op mc.
man you should do these npc commentry less. it is just odd
why do you give protagonist so much advantages at start. there is no effort at all.
It is good read until now Sjjsjsjsjekwo2o8283844uhfnxnakq92983urydhxhi38384859goodosjqh2u28eixjnxbxbxi4i38839291isjxjjd48njdjdxjjzkkaka s s e w w wbjwifij j ufuxu u ju i i i i i i ujrrb e f tbtbtb u u u. Y 4 3 e 4 4. 6 u u v x. W. 3 t f c. S w 2 4. T g x. S w 2 1. 3 4 4. 4 t y g v. X s a w t g. H h h h h h f d s. S x d r e. D
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This is like every naruto fanfiction condensed into one. I have read literally the same story so many times and nothing much different have happened in this onr so i can't judge whether it will be good or not. Will have to see whether this one will finally continue beyond Chunin arc as very few naruto fic go beyond that. F d d .d . D d d . D d d d. D d d d d d d . R r e .E w w e. D f g h h .Y t r r e . F f g t y H u y r e .S f g . H h h y t d d. F g g g g y . E e t . U 4 3 e s f .Gy. 6 5 3 2 2 w d .F g h h 6 5 4 3.w dfgt 4 2 s . Gy6yte
What even is this.
Rather than trade with westeros as focus. MC can focus more on trade with essos as they are richer, less prejudiced than westrosi lords(as they trade with savages like Dothraki) and he can hire manpower quickly. Get some ships if you can kill some slaves that come to capture slaves.