The story was good.is it your life story?
Tell me bro. Love confusion? I like it ver much you have do some effort to become a writer.
Your skill was good but you have to pay attention
For a bignner. You story was but you have you have pay attention your words.
But the story was good. I like it very much. I am very curious for the next chapter you have to do it fast i want the 2nd chapter