I just have to say one thing, you are great mylord ........................................................................ ..........

I like your story. starting with a tragedy. that caught me off guard. it progess well. I appreciate your work👍............................

I like your story. I appreciate your work. 👍. keep going, you may even get a chance to win contest.........................................

I like story. mysterious person is the one that I like the most. you are doing good. I appreciate your work👍...........…....................

story is interesting. I really like how you introduce your character. author is good with its words. I am a new author and I learn so much from you

that's why he said pain+when he fought with bandit he already understand the problem, now he is thinking like a mature man, and he know what he has to do

he didn't have coins. he collected them for future

hlo friends, it's my first time writing the noval. I hope you like it. You would think that MC is childish from the beginning but it is not.