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Tragedy is the secret ingredient to a good romance book 👀
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This is just...horrendous. I've already criticised you on discord so let's just leave it there.
I'm only on chapter 2 and I already feel like I'm reading a bad translation of a novel. No wait, you're just trying to find your style... Oh well, on to the next chapter! :blobtorch:
I don't understand this paragraph, help.
Use ' ' for thoughts and " " for actual speech. Trust me, it helps.
Um, good start, ig? Grammar could be WAY better tho. Now, onwards to the next chapter!