I might be wrong but I've heard Japan is Rising Sun...Not Petal Blossom.

That's just a coincidence or you're just thinking too much. And there's no nationalism or racism foreshadowed in the sentence!

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tbh, it's unnecessary to rewrite it as this is your first novel. We make mistakes, and we constantly improve the better we know. Rewriting the story might cause the flow to disrupt, but all decisions are up to you. Best of luck!

she lost her* I mean :v

Actually, she just lost his equilibrium which means she almost fell. And on top of that, she was humming and was not attentive to her surrounding. With these two combined, she almost fell to her butt 🤣. Anyway, thanks for reading!

I’ll start updating tommorow 😊

nice

That would be explained later 😇

It won't. I'll be updating tmrw. I'm taking a break from this one since I only write it for fun.

Before I talk about the contents of the novel, I would like to rate my book 1 star and you guys decide its worth. Don't worry and don't be shy, I will not delete a single review! Let's talk about the novels. This is a story about a young man who loves the bow. He is just a youngster with a dream like others do. He has average talent but his life change when he acquires a mystical book. This is his legend! Pros. 1. A complex character with each their owns goal and motivation. Villains can be deep too depends on my writing skills and how I'll manage to present them. 2. Each had a reason for their actions. If you might encounter a stupid villain in the first chap, I’ll promise you there's a meaning behind his/her action. 3. A unique world-building with my own power scaling. I contemplated about the cultivation levels and manage to connect them all; this is to show you how a mortal turns into an immortal. One of the themes behind the story is ‘Cultivation and Cultivators’. 4. Each chapter has 3000-4000 words. Battles will have 2000-3000 words per chap. Cons 1. Too much exposition. I know this sounds bad but I am a fan of (Martial World) and have always been eager to write such a novel with an exposition that flows very well. 2. I'm not a native English but that doesn't mean I can't write with proper grammar. Ar most, the quality of the chaps is above average. 3. I write this for fun and to explore my imagination. So I might disappear for a day suddenly without a day. 4. My writing and plot might have been influenced by (MW) so I seek forgiveness if I disappoint everyone.

likewise :d

likewise :d

Likewise :d

That would be explained in about 2-4 chaps. Actually, the mc is the only transmigrator in the era(I'll explain it later :d )

thanks for reading :)

thanks

thanks :)

thanks :)

There will be a single love interest. However, she will only appear later on. :)