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Z_E_Orion6h ago
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What? That's some divination Dayly profit
Past Crewe a copy of the Daily Prophet went round the compartment, and he glanced at the front page without taking it in. A wizarding family in front of a pyramid in the Egyptian sun, all of them red-haired, squinting and laughing. A grand prize draw, the caption said. Bill Weasley's posting in Cairo. Harry registered the Weasleys. He noted that Ron looked well. He turned to the window and the green country going past, and the paper moved on out of the compartment, and that was all there was of it.
Harry Potter Storyteller
Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion6h ago
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A year ago no?
And in his blood — the unicorn quality, absorbed years ago and carried since, met the phoenix tears and the grove-warmth, and the three things together began a negotiation with the venom that was not quite healing. Something older than healing. The venom met what it met and found that it could not go further.
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Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion6h ago
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Sorry for my rant and thanks for coming to my Ted talk
Ollivander's reply was three pages in a hand that was immediately recognisable — the same quality as the man himself, precise and archaic and carrying in its letter-forms the impression of very long acquaintance with the written record of extraordinary things.
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Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion6h ago
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Like this, I'd probably just write something like: "Ollivander’s reply arrived on three pages of parchment in a hand that matched the man himself: precise and old-fashioned."
Ollivander's reply was three pages in a hand that was immediately recognisable — the same quality as the man himself, precise and archaic and carrying in its letter-forms the impression of very long acquaintance with the written record of extraordinary things.
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Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion6h ago
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I'll recommend trying out grok, its slightly better att writing from my experience
He picked up his quill and wrote, in the margin of his notes, in the smallest hand he used when he was writing only for himself: the memory of the world. Then he sat back and watched and did not say a word, because the correct response to certain kinds of witnessing was simply to continue witnessing, and he was a man who had learned, in forty years, to know the difference between a moment that required his voice and a moment that required his silence.
Harry Potter Storyteller
Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion6h ago
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Idk what happened after like chapter 30 but the LLM has gon of the deap end, the way it writes it frustrating to read. The plot has been interesting, the premise is intruding but the writing...
He said nothing. There was nothing to say that would not be smaller than what he had just witnessed. He watched Harry turn the dark stone over in his hands with an expression of profound unfamiliarity — not with the stone, but with what the stone's existence implied about the nature of the person holding it — and he thought, not for the first time but with a completeness he had not previously achieved, that he was watching the beginning of something that the history books would eventually need chapters for.
Harry Potter Storyteller
Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion6h ago
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The llm is getting worse 😭 Always "specific way", "in the way somthing", " in a way that _ did not"
He held it and felt it. The basalt carried heat in a way that the granite had not — not the surface warmth of a stone left in the sun, but an interior warmth, patient and very old. The memory of the magma had not simply given it form. It had given it something more like character.
Harry Potter Storyteller
Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion15h ago
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Im confused, was Nevil not on the train with Harry to hogwarts? Why is he sending letters
The change was in the precision of his descriptions. He was a careful observer in the way of someone who spent a great deal of time with plants — he noticed things in sequence, noted what was consistent and what varied, understood that small changes over time produced large results. He was, without quite realising it, treating his parents' recovery the way he'd treat a difficult Herbology project: with patient, specific attention.
Harry Potter Storyteller
Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion15h ago
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Is Nevil not at hogwarts ?!
He walked back to the castle in the late afternoon and wrote to Augusta: *How are the visits going? Has Neville been bringing things from the greenhouse regularly?*
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Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss
Z_E_Orion16h ago
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Beginning of this chapter and the previous doesn’t flow particularly well, why mention that Neil arrived at the table as if its the first time Harry sees him since last year ? They sat on the train together for like what 5h+
Ch 30 Chapter Thirty: What Second Year Is For
Harry Potter Storyteller
Book&Literature · Aaronsthanss