See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

So far I really don’t have any complaints when it comes to this novel. You can that the author has been writing for a while because his grammar is very solid and has very few mistakes. It’s a very dialogue heavy novel so you can find solid character development based on what the characters say. So far my favorite character is Kira Jane who serves as almost like a mother figure to our main cast. Based on these early chapters her back story in the one I am most interested in founding out about. Besides her our main four(or five counting Layla) all seem to have very realized personalities. Crow is like a slick talking street guy who observes people(no pun Intended) like a crow would. Mari is the positive force of the cast who is equally as fiesty. Jack does annoy me, however beneath his stupid decisions he has a heart of gold. Sach is the quietest of the group, but comes through for them when it comes to battle strategies and overall is probably the smartest person out of all of them. Lastly, we have Layla who doesn’t really fit into a particular box. She’s strong, always ahead of the game, and clearly cares quite a lot about her new friends. Overall, this story has a lot of potential and it updates very consistently! Keep an eye out on it?