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I love myself a good, well written romantic story. Kudos! you've captured my attention on this one 😁... Thought I was going to struggle through the first chapters as is usually the case when I read most romantic novels but no, I did not, on the contrary it looks like catch up with the author's update schedule in a day or two & that goes to say how fun and engaging the story is 😎✌️
It's worth a shot my man😂
short yet captivating prologue 😊😊 awesome
The novel has a good pilot chapter that sets the tone of the story and captures the reader's attention. I loved the cliffhanger at the end😎... Not yet sure about the plotline but am sure the author will make it all known as the story progresses. All in all am enjoying my read thus far, will keep track on how the story unfolds
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I would suggest you revisit the paragraph, maybe something like along these lines "Before Alice and the young man could do anything, they were frozen in place by some imaginary power" 🤝
I would suggest it reads "He was a normal human being who went through a journey full of adventure and tribulation, that shaped who he became to be" 😉
Itz_JayJWay ahead of you😉... am greatful for the informative comment. Guess what, I was also thinking about the same, and I updated the chapter to include your line of thought 🤝
This is my review of the first 7 chapter, I'll end the day by saying "COOL!!"... This is surprisingly a good novel and I've enjoyed my read thus far. The characters are well written, the story and it's progression is well thought out & the writing quality is amazingly good. I needed a good calm read after a long day & this surely did the trick... will keep up with the next chapters & drop my second review when a couple of chapters in. Good Novel, worth a collection 🤝
I love the pilot chapter, dah! It gets you hooked by the very first few paragraphs... Odd but I love chapter 12 "Proudly a pervert" 😅 With the chapters I have read thus far I am enjoying the story. The story building is good so is the writing style, so far I have queries. Good story...worth my collection
I have read a number of female lead novels & I must say, this could be among my top go to FL novels. It's quiet unique, with a different touch from what am used to reading... Am currently on chapter 22 of the novel & I have no complaints so far, the story is engaging, the characters are good as is the writing. Keep up the good work author, will keep an eye to see how the story unfolds.
My attention was grabbed by the very first chapter, I am currently on chapter 17 & I must say you have quiet a good & unique story here... I love vengeance themed stories so am digging the vibe of this novel. The characters good, the story development is good, so is the writing #no complaints thus far... Will soon give my second review as soon as I read more chapters. Otherwise, this novel is worth my read
They say if a good pilot chapter determines the success of a story. I must say, though the novels only has two content chapters, It has captured my attention. The writing quality I good, so is the flow of the story. I love the introduction of Sami and interested to see where the journey leads. Overall I will keep an eye on this story hoping the author will continue writing.