For just starting seems pretty good. The author was upfront about consistency so I expect some delays due to writer blocks. As a short story writer myself I can understand that completely.The character development seems lacking but I haven't seen a lot of social interactions between Ash and other people. A new person came into play recently so hopefully I can see some progress on that and get to know the new MC. Looking forward to it I hope SilverNexusPendragon keeps the train rolling.