kris_EL

Well regardless I didn't Number this chapter as you can see if there is a numbering of the chapter that would have to be Ink Stone seeing as I write directly from the site. And I would appreciate you not to presume to TELL me what to do on MY story, now while I do appreciate feedback good or bad please don't tell me what to do. If you wish to write your own story one day, then I am sure you will understand. Also, OMAKE is a Japanese term that does not apply to me. I was just goofing off and throwing something in for fun, if you don't like it please feel free to let me know, as even bad reviews help me make a better story. I do thank you for reading and taking the time to comment I will try to do better in the future. Happy reading :P

ok how can order 66 take place in 2 years when the clones have only been cooking for about a year??? I mean kinda skipped the entire first movie....if he knows starwars that well he would understand the basic timeline

ok this is getting stupid.....3 wishes and already he is the chosen one of the force with just the first wish

fair enough

he skipped the whole story now its just make more money and promote the same shit this is not a story

please dont let AI do comparative writing

dovish??

its probably Chinese so math will not math but at least it looks hopeful

lol you know that by selling this you are breaking copyright laws and could be charged with a felony and or law suit right....