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Bunny_Chan_01

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Just a day dreamer....

2021-07-05 JoinedIndia
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Posted

    Well, the writing quality is just flawless. The story building is so nice that I felt like I was there. Honestly, I loved it.😊😊

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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Knights are really so brave and strong

    "It's not too serious, princess" Rowry assured, his voice, deep and gentle. "I've had wounds much worse"
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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Yeah, I feel that too...A single strike from a giant beast is enough to destroy a ship in no time.

    Viera looked at him with concern, for there was another crash to evade, as she feared that even a single hit from such a creature could finally sink the ship.
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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Reading this, I felt like I'm right there witnessing all these chilling moments with the crew. Wow...I'm loving it❤️

    It had been a full minute since the last blast from the cannons. The black trident's crew had spent every moment since then reloading, rearming themselves with long spears, and watching the sea for signs of the beast's return. All eyes were glued to the horizon, hoping for a glimpse of something other than the dark void ahead. The wind howled and whistled across the deck, while the cannons continued to spit fire into the water. No matter where the beast went, it was sure to come back with more ferocity. Thiles knew this; it wasn't his first time at sea.
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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Replied to makss

    Thanks a lot !!! 💜😊

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    The present I got for writing a story
    Urban · Bunny_Chan_01
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Replied to CallieLy

    Thank you so much!!! It means a lot to me. And sure I will try my best to improve my writing skills 🥰💜

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    The present I got for writing a story
    Urban · Bunny_Chan_01
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Replied to Account_nolonger

    Thank you so much 🥰🥰

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    The present I got for writing a story
    Urban · Bunny_Chan_01
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Posted

    The story is very interesting and beautiful. The simplicity of the use of words, makes it unique. I will come back to read new chapters. As it has won my heart...Keep it up Ami, your writing is really good.♡♡🥰

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    Story close
    Teen · Account_nolonger
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Your simplicity of using simple and nice words makes it even more beautiful!!! 🥰♡♡

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Is he Dead?
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    Story close
    Teen · Account_nolonger
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Posted

    I like this story because it is well descriptive. The writing quality is superb... the characters are very detailed. While I was reading this, I thought I was watching a movie...Must give it a try. ♡♡♡

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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    I liked it, it's so descriptive and detailed. I'll be back for chapter 2😊♡

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    You got it!

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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Yeah, face your fear, your fear will fear you!

    "We cannot turn back now" Rowry said. "As the princess said, we need to stay on course. We'll smash it up against the rocks. That thing's got the speed of a bullet, but not the brains of a bird. Stay calm, men, it will be over soon. Now, keep the cannons loaded, and prepare to fire at the slightest movement!"
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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Yeah, this kinda of rule should be abolished

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    The Crown's Heir
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Umm...yeah that's obvious...

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    The Crown's Heir
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Whoa😨

    Then came the rattle of the chain links, the clink of metal rings, and a sudden splash of cold water. A massive head broke the surface of the water, only inches away from the starboard rail. Its jaws opened wide, revealing rows of jagged, pointed teeth, like a dragon's fangs. Then the monster snapped shut, and with a loud crunch, the waves sent The black tridents' masts flying.
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    The Crown's Heir
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Wait...Did the beast picka boo them?

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    The Crown's Heir
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Wow, I must say... your writing style is really cool. It's like I'm watching a movie. everything is very descriptive

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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    This beast is quite scary...😬

    Sir Rowry had no response but to silently nod to his squad to steel themselves for what the beast planned next.
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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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  • Bunny_Chan_01
    Bunny_Chan_011yr
    Commented

    Choosing a path different from your parents helps you, see the reality of this world...

    "Mosasaurus, Sir! Don't think that volley is going to put it down just yet either..." The golden haired knight replied, sounding uncharacteristically bold as he helped a knight on the starboard bow load another cannonball. There was not a sea critter thiles did not know, he grew up at sea having sailors as parent, but he chose to be a knight instead.
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    The Crown's Heir
    Fantasy · Hank_moses
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