why is it that every day theirs basically a meeting for the villages Almost every day like it doesnt make since

2012 happened yk

You should go back and clean up your storys brother. Not talking bout the patrion storys you be spamming you need to go and start deleting all these plz vote mass release and power stone eps. ill be reading then have to skip 5 chapters to continue the story since you dont remove them after a certain amount of time of them being posted

Basically ghost z all over again Wouldnt read it if i were u

W chapter cant wait for the next one

is air

No since that gets rid of the entire premiss of making one piece special its based about devil fruits and powers

but most major battles never happen on sea and when they do the enemys have some form or way to fly or item to float on also the fruit part is what makes the fiction special thats like me reading any fiction theres always going to be someone using martial arts or some sword style.

why do you make all of your fics patrion only?

bros self promoting in a fan fic comment

i just cant keep reading i made it to chapter 5 and just couldnt some of the stuff and logic didnt make since like how the BANDIT leader fully knew how to use chakra dont make since brother then the mc is killing with no remorse and it randomly left 1st person to go to 3rd i dont know what to tell you but revamp this if you want it to be good.

this chapter was so short

where my pic at homie

NO its started

what ff is it?

when r you gonna make a non patreon story?

Thats like asking why the girls simp for sasuke

when naruto was in 4tailed cloak it burns on contact that makes since genjutsu i can only chalk up to kurama clan

Exp

nah no thanks your keeping us hostage