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*Spoiler* I planned to have the ending with Lixue ending up becoming a full-fledged demon. The devil who enticed him will be killed by him and he would then be killed by He Ruiqi. He Ruiqi is the main character of a story and Lixue was destined to die one way or another. Of course, he's not powerful enough to beat Lixue in reality. He will get help from the Scribe who is a god and something like the avatar of the author in Lixue's world. As for the romance perspective, Lixue will end up with Thirteen. General Yi and Little Ji will be his subordinates. Both have feelings for him, so Lixue of course used them. That's it for the spoilers. I'm sorry for the late response. Thank you for your understanding 🙏
Ch 59 Final Announcement - ohremi192yrReplied to GalacticRage
You're right... Why did I even... (!!=@x@=)
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I forgot QAQ
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Considering she is a sky lord… it is rather fitting (=ʘᆽʘ=)
"Now, for all of you who are watching this, your task is very simple. On the corner of this screen, there is a barcode that you can scan with your communicator. It will then direct you to download a game. All you have to do is defeat the boss in that game. It is a group task, and you will be matched with other players and make a team of five. For the team who manage to defeat the boss first, they will be given a prize exclusively from me, yours truly. Easy and fun, right? As for the bomb, they will detonate randomly starting from now, so good luck for our lovely Keepers. - ohremi192yrReplied to Boba_Milk_Tea
Huh, didn't think about that one… Good idea (=｀ﻌ´=)
The other 2 looked in horror as a chunk of cut-off tongue fell down to the ground and blood poured down from their colleague's mouth like a faucet. The punch was so hard that it cut off the servant's tongue when he accidentally bit it. - ohremi192yrReplied to Noire_Nova
Master, you're back! It's fixed /ᐠ .⋏. ᐟ\ﾉ
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Thank you for your guidance Master Noire ฅ(• ɪ •)ฅ
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I meant it like 'one arm aim somewhere and the other somewhere else' (^･o･^)ﾉ
The Irregular stretched out its front pair of limbs intending to catch Mo Fan. He divided his aim one staying to its head while the other to its incoming hands. Although his mecha's light shield was active, it was still better to not get hit after all. - ohremi192yrReplied to Noire_Nova
This is also a part of the narrative. (/ =ω=)/
Just as he was cutting a Sonic Bat's ear, he felt the entire cave shook and Lixue called him. - ohremi192yrReplied to Noire_Nova
I used 'broke' because it is a part of the narrative which all use past tense. Should I still change to 'break' here? Also, Rhine is an intentional name. d(=^･ω･^=)b
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I've fixed the 'lend' to 'lent', but I don't know about the possessive modifier... (QwQ^)~
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do you mean 'to attack' should become 'for attack' or something else? (=⁰w⁰=)?
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Thank you for telling me (=;ェ;=)
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Done /ᐠ≗ᆽ≗ᐟ \
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I changed the 'does' to 'do' but I don't know what to change the 'can' (=･ｪ･=?
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- ohremi192yrReplied to ruupia
Thank you for pointing out my mistake! It's already fixed now~ (≈ㅇᆽㅇ≈)♡
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