That don't sound suspicious, nope. Not at all.

I'm suddenly getting Cyberpunk vibes. I mean, I'm all for that sort of thing being included in a story that has full-dive tech, since it would only make sense that they also have other high-tech stuff.

no, it really isn't. one you can reason with, the other is just brutal, and merciless. The only time Demons can be negotiated with is in SMT, where "Demon" is the catch all term for anything you can fuse, summon, and more often than not, fight. Including the God of the Bible. Besides, Surtr (as is his proper name) isn't a demon, he's a Fire Giant from Muspelheim in Norse mythology.

Oh hey, a TTS meme. nice.

Besides, all I was saying is that it's likely from Mexico.

Yes, but they have their own dialect of Spanish. Just like how Quebec French isn't Parisian French. There are words in both you won't find in the other.

*I could hollow. Not Hallow. Hallow means holy, not holey. Hence Hallowe'en. Hallows Evening. Or All Hallow's Eve. Which was originally the Day of the Dead in Celtic tradition, to the best of my knowledge. I might be wrong on it being Celtic. Anyways, I'm still enjoying this. At the very least you're not putting the name of the character, then a colon and then spoken words, like some of the other authors. That sort of thing should only be kept to roleplaying.

I think you meant "bullet *pouch*", not bullet *bouch*. You're literally one letter off from saying bullet mouth in mixed English and French. Interesting idea so far. Though I have to wonder if Condoms count towards that irrational fear of balloons.

Of course your pupils are black, that's the place where light goes into your eyes to get turned into imagery by your brain. I think you may have meant your "irises", though, since that's the place where your eye colour shows.

Wait... but that means... He could make Devola and Popola, as well as the YoRHa girls and boys. Well, pretty much any machine that has sentience/sapience.

Bit of a missed opportunity... One more "Hn" would make it seem like Sasuke was laughing at Kakashi.

it says "Unbreakable: Milim Nava". not too hard to spot, for me at least. I think it means her bond with Milim is unbreakable, nothing can even get close to shattering the bonds between sisters.

He just pulled a Neptune. Good job, my dude, you just massacred the Fourth Wall.

where the hell did this even come from...? no, seriously, even PhoenixSC on YouTube noted it was a thing, and he usually doesn't pay attention to stuff like that. I haven't been paying attention to the usual places this would come from, so I'm quite confused.

NANI?!

You're just looking to start a fight it seems. who cares what character he uses for the love interest? if you want saber instead, just write your own story. it's as simple as that. otherwise, bugger off. nobody needs people like you commenting on their stories with crap like this. almost as toxic as FFN's comment sections, honestly.

I mean, saber has anime tropes too. if you're talking about Fate/Stay Night's Saber. She literally embodies Black Hole Stomach alongside Kirby.

i think you mean "exaggeration", since understatement means he's under-estimating him.

yeah, someone kinda beat me to it, but that's definitely not a reference to HP movie 4, nope, not at all.

Is that what they're calling it these days? Why, in my days they called it playing doctor. you whippersnappers and your newfangled vocabulary...! *ahem* in all seriousness, who the heck thought "grokk" sounded like a real word meant to represent "understand/understood"?